Reviews for Arrival
Ebony Lee chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Man, I couldn't even get through half this chapter before my urge to review made me take a break. I just gotta say, even though Kat IS kind of a Mary-Sue, I like the character and how she is protrayed. Honestly.

I find that I'm fond of this story mostly because I remember that night at Dad's house in Minneapolis when our cousins Katie and Caleb were spending the night, and I asked you to tell us all a story. This was the one you told us, but at the time it wasn't finished. I'm really glad I finally got to read more of it.

But anyway, I suppose now I should finish reading it so I can review properly, huh? Good stuff, Kase, real good stuff.
Lynn chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Well written I like these human to mobius stories also. I wonder if she could meet the Dark Legion?

Maybe some others that haven't seen a human often.

Just an idea but it's good as it is.