Reviews for Sins of the Father
Renuki chapter 18 . 12/14/2011
...starcream! Is he about to be revive soon!

And oh shit, the plant eater is cooooming.

(also stilll don't like Gavly.)
Renuki chapter 7 . 12/14/2011
...

*crack knuckles* I'm going to find a way to murder Galvatron right now...
Renuki chapter 4 . 12/14/2011
Ouch.

*although how in the hell it hurt a robot made out of metal, i won't know.*
Renuki chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
...

*blinks* Well, now... o.o
Nirianne chapter 17 . 10/12/2007
Indeed. AT least things for her calmed down now; hehe. I really liked the way you were relating the clues to 'Screamer himself. I really like it. This, I've got to read on. )
Little Red Hood chapter 18 . 10/8/2007
Okay. Sorry if I was a little harsh earlier but certain stuff was just getting to me. I am stil curious to see where you're going to take this.
Little Red Hood chapter 17 . 10/7/2007
Please, for the love of God, stop having Zephyr get raped in every other chapter! No one likes to read about a character they've grown to like getting used and abused. That's why this story isn't as popular as "A Series of Impossibilities." Megatron is coming off as weak and pathetic, which is sad for a character like him. At this point, I'm actually hoping Unicron obliterates them all just so they'll be put out of their collective misery.

Yes, rape is traumatic and sometimes traumatic things are necessary for character development but when you use it too often it just drives your readers away.
Elita One chapter 17 . 10/4/2007
megs just needs to kill galvatrons aft.

maybe a little optimus and megs vs galvatron
Elita One chapter 16 . 10/2/2007
omg i was actually scared

cool!
Elita One chapter 14 . 9/25/2007
er

galvatron you syco aft

super kill!
soulfulbee chapter 13 . 9/24/2007
Now galvatron must die in a hideous slow death very painful, maniacal death , i mean painful. Please putty please. Really good keep up the work
Elita One chapter 13 . 9/23/2007
hes safe unless galvs harms her, then megs will have himself a galvatron BBQ
Nirianne chapter 12 . 9/22/2007
Wow, the emotions run really high. Now, these are the sort of fics I would read; something out of the normal! I hope she could really regain back everything she lost.
Kirmon64 chapter 12 . 9/22/2007
Yay for Zephyr!

...On second thought... yay for Ratchet and his awesome healing abilities! *cheers*
Aethelgythe chapter 12 . 9/22/2007
phew...okay. At least the old Zyphyr is breaking through again thanks to ol' Hatchet! LOL. Please update soon...and give that bastard Galvatron a slow, excrutiating death.
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