Reviews for Target
anna.windjeppesen chapter 1 . 5/2
This is good. The way you write is easy to understand and it's catchy. so update soon, ne?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
I love the story so far! ;)
xxXxx chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Nice one!
Nebula'sPhoenix chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Write another chapter please! I like it and I want to know what happens next! XD
yuuki878 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
This story is really good so far and i can't wait till you update so please update soon.
XxXFoxieXxX chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
This is a really good story and I would be really happy of u carried on writing it!
;P please
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
sounds promising, this story :) I'm very curious about what will happen next! So far, I like it, but it was a little bit confusing with those flashbacks and the task of putting them in order. And I don't really know if Luffy would glare so much...?
Either way, I would SO like to read more! :)
Minatu the Terrible chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
It's good so far! You tend to get "your" [which is possesive] mixed up with "you're" [you are], so you might want to watch put for that. Please contine, it's quite enjoyable!
someonesaveme chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
write more please!
Crazybabe chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
loved it! :D really can't wait for the next chapter...oh yeah what's with the person that was waiting for luffy to fall asleep and how old is luffy?
Crazybabe chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
coooome on it's been almost a year since i've read this, its great but i really really really want to read the next chapter... i'm sorry i know it's a lot of work to make up storys but can't you hurry up or something? wow sounds so bitchy just goes to show how much i like your writing
SuzumeSwallow chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
AWSOME! I love this Fic! :D

Please update soon!8D
KTDLover chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
OMFGWTFLOLTTYLBBQ! This is AMAZING!8D

Pleeeeeeaaase continue!:D
zairoon chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Only one chapter? è-é...My god, i'm already fond of this story! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! I don't usually like AU fictions, but this one started really well! Pleaaaaaase keep writting!
Sachiel Angelo chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Where is the next one? Looks good.
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