Reviews for I Did It With A Phantom
anubisd101 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
You should continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Ummm...ok. im sorry im a critiq-no a hard to please critiq, but then again this was ny first lemon, but then i read this again...it sucked,and not in the good way.
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
Nixter97 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
There's not that much fanfics that involve Sam doing it with Danny while he's in Phantom-Mode. :/

Gr8 job! :D
Mr. Aanonymous chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
not long enough
The Reader chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Not TOO bad for a first
WildestHeart4ever chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
It kinda came a little quike like the one of Phantom Stallion, but it was ok a little short but ok
inu-rulz chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
dont worry im a virgin 2 but that sounds about rite
Animorphs Boyz Luver 48 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Totaly Awesome! )

-Rach
ember13dp chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Nice job! Although I wish it was a bit longer...

DxS LEMON! YAY!
Miko in training chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
thats cute.. is it a one shot or a story... its a really cute oneshot keep up the good work :)
Puppylove chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Well...That was quite romantic
FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Well, abrupt but adorable. Cute, good job!
bonillaescope chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
Sorry but I think this isn't good.

Its not the story, but how you wrote it. It needs better detail. Also ' “Don’t, you look beautiful.” This complement left her blushing..." and anything like that is wrong.

It should be ~

"You look beautiful" A blush spread across her face….”

Well that was just an example so..

Understand what I’m saying?

Also I don't understand why it was a flashback, the little detail you chose, and why his eyes where green when he woke up.
Jaxxy chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
very...quick.

Honestly, the DxS thing is getting old around here, what happened to OC pairings? D: