Reviews for Darkly Comes the Tide |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this was a amazing, wish there was more :D |
![]() ![]() This story is so beautifully written! The last half is almost like a poem. The entire thing is perfect. |
![]() ![]() wow, very nice! I like how it's detailed in the beginning and slowly becomes more vague as it goes on. It would be nice if you wrote another one except making it an actual story. As in, putting all the details and elaborating on certain points. But it turned out the way I'm sure you wanted it to. And it turned out amazing. |
![]() ![]() ? T_T Sequal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job poor Mikey (sob sob sob sob) |
![]() ![]() At least Mikey wasn't dead just that his personality and emotional being changed. I wish you continued this. This would have been a good prologue, and the rest of the chapters can show Mikey as a different tutrle with him often remembering the torture he endured while his family tries to help him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story always gives me a heavy heart... but that just means it was well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A-Amazing, such emotion... M-My heart clenched everywhere... M-My only r-request is to m-make a sequel, p-please... B-But you d-don't have t-to... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to see a sequel to this story, it was very well written and so awesome! :3 Very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story so says Angsty sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, poor Mikey! (Poor everybody, actually). What a sad story. I can't help but be curious about what exactly happened to Mikey while he was held prisoner (though I probably don't want to know, do I?). It's a shame there's no sequel. It would be interesting to actually see how Mikey's changed, and how that has affected his family. But, good job and thanks for sharing this :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, this is so sad! |
![]() ![]() Really...the last few statements sounded like metaphors. Mikey was dead, but Michaelangelo was still alive. Karai had killed his humor with relentless torture... Yeah, that sounds about right. Great job, I liked this story! The only weird thing was that it was written, for the most part, present tense. Most people use past tense, so this was a little new... Again, great job! Hope to read more from you soon! ~Burakku's Shadow/Manjoume-Enchantress |
![]() ![]() Awesome, very moving. The part in the junk yard, with ralph, in particular was a good job, getting across very moving emotions in so few words. Good job. I would love to know what happened to Mikey though, and how is he changed, just sad, or no jokes, what? I would love to see more of this story. Please write another chapter or something. Feed the hungry readers, you gave us a taste and we want more, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa... that was really good I know you said one shot. but what did they do to Mike? *pouts* Great writing though! |