Reviews for Zapp's Package
the alpha phoenix chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Fantastically hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing. You wrote Zapp and Kif perfectly. Great job.
NightmareBeforeChristmasFreak chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
This is pretty much one of the funniest things I have ever read...yes. You had Zapp's character right on! Loved it when KIf opened the crate! HA! Velour...ZAPP'S A WEIRDO! Loved it!
StarTraveler chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
I love this!

Zap and Leela are my fav characters
MoonlightUmbreon chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Lol I love it. I've always liked to see Zapp Brannigan fail to win Leela.
Forgotmytea chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Brilliantly written, had me laughing out loud and receiving rather weird looks from other people in the computer room :P My only disappointment with this is it's too short! ;)
sideshow al chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
i was trying to stay awake in that story SO BORING

DELETE THIS CRAP
Solatium chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Very nice prose. You handle Zapp's POV well.
The Letter Atrophy chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
D: That was so horrifying! Poor Kif.

But also very amusing. And, even better, I can imagine it happening on the show. Which is pretty rare on this site!
Dead Composer chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Heh heh. The title "Zapp's Package" is in itself an innuendo.
Diary chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
This was great. Your characterisation of all of them was spot-on.
Michiru's Mirror chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
You did a perfect job of capturing both Zapp's personality and the feeling of the show. It's rare to find a writer who can do both comedy and drama (just read your Onigumo and Osamu fic). You've got a lot of talent.
TheUnknownblur chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Nice story. Love the Zapp humor in this. But you do have some spelling and grammar issues to look over. Your paragraphing could do with a touch up to.