|Reviews for Zapp's Package|
| MTC29 chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
That was both funny and an easy read. I could easily see this used as a scene in the TV show.
| the alpha phoenix chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Fantastically hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing. You wrote Zapp and Kif perfectly. Great job.
| NightmareBeforeChristmasFreak chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
This is pretty much one of the funniest things I have ever read...yes. You had Zapp's character right on! Loved it when KIf opened the crate! HA! Velour...ZAPP'S A WEIRDO! Loved it!
| StarTraveler chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
I love this!
Zap and Leela are my fav characters
| MoonlightUmbreon chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Lol I love it. I've always liked to see Zapp Brannigan fail to win Leela.
| Forgotmytea chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Brilliantly written, had me laughing out loud and receiving rather weird looks from other people in the computer room :P My only disappointment with this is it's too short! ;)
| sideshow al chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
i was trying to stay awake in that story SO BORING
DELETE THIS CRAP
| Solatium chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Very nice prose. You handle Zapp's POV well.
| The Letter Atrophy chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
D: That was so horrifying! Poor Kif.
But also very amusing. And, even better, I can imagine it happening on the show. Which is pretty rare on this site!
| Dead Composer chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Heh heh. The title "Zapp's Package" is in itself an innuendo.
| Diary chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
This was great. Your characterisation of all of them was spot-on.
| Michiru's Mirror chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
You did a perfect job of capturing both Zapp's personality and the feeling of the show. It's rare to find a writer who can do both comedy and drama (just read your Onigumo and Osamu fic). You've got a lot of talent.
| TheUnknownblur chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Nice story. Love the Zapp humor in this. But you do have some spelling and grammar issues to look over. Your paragraphing could do with a touch up to.