Reviews for Swimming Lessons
llazo4108824 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I like this fanfic.
MisaHyuga chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
This was awesome and cute. I am sure when Hinata confesses her love with him (and not with Pein, because he probably forgot about it, being the knucklehead.), she may get so much confidence after him approving of her. :) Loved the story.
Towards the sun chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Damn..., how many swimming lessons they got everyday?
Demon Of Sacrifice chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
nahia2008 chapter 1 . 7/25/2009 lessons eh ?

really good
purropolisprincess chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
wow this is cute and sexy hehe

thanks again for reading my story!
My painful Symphony chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
that was perfect! _ ilove how you caputered narutos feelings adn made hinata scream at that dude lmao hahahahahahhaha great job!
Sakouya chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
dude u rule
MC25 chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
i really loved this story... the dialog and description of it. I've seen better seduction, but your fic did a decent job at it.

(but next time please put 'warning lemon' somewhere in the title? cause the whole sex thing actually hit me like a ton of bricks)
yeuxdessirene chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
That was good. I liked how the nine tailed fox instincts took over Naruto. I can see that happening.

Swimming lessons never looked so good.
PhantasmagoricBlade chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Yeah, yeah Hinata likes it from behind.

I am a super perv.

SDF Macross chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
WOW! Extremely HOT!
dragonrider246 chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
good story! I liked the lemon, in a lot of stories they seem, oh i don't know, corny maybe. but this one was great. anyway, good work!
allicat chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
sequal, sequal!
Narutomaniac chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
I hope you write a sequel to this it was great I really really really really liked it.
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