Reviews for Of Marbles Lost and Found: Raising Harry 4
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 6 . 1/6/2016
Why are you making Narcissa so much older than Sirius? She's only about four years older than him.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 4 . 1/6/2016
The amount of time you have the Griff Quidditch team practicing is unreasonable. There are four teams, and the Griffs are taking up about half the time available for practices, leaving the other three teams to try to squeeze their practices into the other half. Surely one of the other teams (Snakes) would complain about the lack of consideration for the other teams.
noylj chapter 8 . 10/12/2015
So, Lucy is imperioused, so he didn't lie.
You really like Lucy enough to come up with this plot?
pikachucat chapter 9 . 11/1/2014
awesome
eli's cauldron chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
love this! can't wait for an update!
dragoncreators chapter 9 . 11/29/2013
wasn't it three hours last book? Great story, I love how everyone underestimates him because of his accent!
dragoncreators chapter 2 . 11/29/2013
We are moving into a new house soon, a brand-new ordered custom house, for the first time in my life, we are by grandma's, so with me, my sister, mom and grandma I'm going to probably get some stuff to protect it. It would be nice to be in a house without a previous owner, as all the ones we've been in, including this one, have had ghosts, not that it's a BAD thing, but I didn't know them in life, and having a woman with white hair in a hospital gown walking down the hall at night is awkward. It's nice that grandpa still is around, though last month I was spooked from my sleep and spooked HIM away, but he is still around, just less apparent... It's quite sad. But still, I cannot wait! :D

Aurora
Guest chapter 9 . 3/15/2013
I absolutely adore that ending! Draco can be a lot more entertaining than most people give him credit for.
Liberwolf chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Wasn't Livia born on June 28th? Why isn't there a mention of her birthday celebration?
Jade Dagger chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
I love this series and this perspective. I know you had some troubles awhile back. Hope everything's going alright for you now.
The Weatherwitch chapter 9 . 5/12/2012
Love it xD

interesting ideas in this one

i loved it

well done :D
PenNameless1994 chapter 9 . 11/15/2011
i'm working my way through your series, but I have to say that the "Trouble" song was wonderful.
PotterFrkInTx chapter 9 . 6/2/2011
WOW! What a great way to cover the 3rd year! I kinda saw it coming, what with the way you've gotten Harry into these things, but that was most definitely a GREAT 3rd year story! Looking forward to more!
PotterFrkInTx chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I meant to put this in a previous review, but I am really diggin' the way you included the entirety of the Gryffindor boy's dorm in this series of fiction, even if Dean and Seamus are somewhat peripheral characters. Keep it up!
hochexplosiv chapter 9 . 1/9/2011
Now that promises Harrys 5th year to be extremly AU. But now I will have to read the 4th year.
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