Reviews for Of Marbles Lost and Found: Raising Harry 4 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great (re)read! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are you making Narcissa so much older than Sirius? She's only about four years older than him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The amount of time you have the Griff Quidditch team practicing is unreasonable. There are four teams, and the Griffs are taking up about half the time available for practices, leaving the other three teams to try to squeeze their practices into the other half. Surely one of the other teams (Snakes) would complain about the lack of consideration for the other teams. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, Lucy is imperioused, so he didn't lie. You really like Lucy enough to come up with this plot? |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this! can't wait for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wasn't it three hours last book? Great story, I love how everyone underestimates him because of his accent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() We are moving into a new house soon, a brand-new ordered custom house, for the first time in my life, we are by grandma's, so with me, my sister, mom and grandma I'm going to probably get some stuff to protect it. It would be nice to be in a house without a previous owner, as all the ones we've been in, including this one, have had ghosts, not that it's a BAD thing, but I didn't know them in life, and having a woman with white hair in a hospital gown walking down the hall at night is awkward. It's nice that grandpa still is around, though last month I was spooked from my sleep and spooked HIM away, but he is still around, just less apparent... It's quite sad. But still, I cannot wait! :D Aurora |
![]() ![]() I absolutely adore that ending! Draco can be a lot more entertaining than most people give him credit for. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wasn't Livia born on June 28th? Why isn't there a mention of her birthday celebration? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this series and this perspective. I know you had some troubles awhile back. Hope everything's going alright for you now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it xD interesting ideas in this one i loved it well done :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm working my way through your series, but I have to say that the "Trouble" song was wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! What a great way to cover the 3rd year! I kinda saw it coming, what with the way you've gotten Harry into these things, but that was most definitely a GREAT 3rd year story! Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I meant to put this in a previous review, but I am really diggin' the way you included the entirety of the Gryffindor boy's dorm in this series of fiction, even if Dean and Seamus are somewhat peripheral characters. Keep it up! |