|Reviews for Rise of the Nightlords|
| YokaiAngel chapter 22 . 10/30
Sad... But cute... Overall an awesome story~
| wenduo chapter 22 . 9/26/2014
Such a unique end. Sad "well i cried a bit" happy and very realistic. But in the end it was a happy end Just wanted to review even if you mostly grew out of this fandom years ago.
| Darthjester13 chapter 22 . 3/11/2013
| Aftonen chapter 10 . 11/22/2011
So Ion and Mirka are executed for helping them, and all Abel cares about is that Astha is coming? What the heck. Then you have Esther feel BETTER after she says that Ion and his grandmother were executed. I'm sorry if I'm a bit disappointed in the lack of care presented in this fic. Also, you have every character talking like a bored teenager. That also makes no sense, since neither Cain (which is how you spell his name) nor Abel would say "What's up guys?". Gah. You have a great idea here, but it looks to me as if it's just an outline for the great fic you had in mind.
| Star the Foxhound chapter 22 . 2/16/2011
This was sad. XD I seriously had tears in my eyes reading the epilogue, and I don't usually get that emotional with stories. The fact that Abel's my favorite character ever might have something to do with that. Why'd you do that Abel? XD
Anyway, I loved the story idea, and the plot. The ending was good too, as much as I hate Abel being dead, I did like it.
The only thing I have to say that annoyed me was that misspellings of some of the character names. It's Caterina, not Caterena. And Cain, not Kain. But I was able to overlook and enjoy the story.
Great story. :) I enjoyed reading it.
| Seirei Nightlord05 chapter 22 . 1/24/2011
Hi...Been a while...
Vell, while in all honesty, I kinda partially disliked the ending, but at the very least, this epilogue make up for it...
The epilogue is quite cute...Poor Abel-niisan...He still didn't like the way he is remembered...
Abel: A stain glass window...What do you expect?
Rei: Like Lilith-neechan said, be grateful that it is a stain glass window and not a statue...
But, at least he is now happy, while Kain, Seth and Catherina quietly laugh while looking at both Lilith's statue and Abel's stain glass window...
Do take care of yourself...Bye2...
| Darkrusnik05 chapter 21 . 9/20/2010
This is so sad. I cried for a whole day after reading this!
Anyway thankyou for an amazing story!
| magpiedragon chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Oh, so you ended this? I started to read some time ago and now I had the chance to finish.
Now, I hope you can withstand a bit of critique. I'm sorry for that.
First of all (and I hope you won't be offended) if you corrected it here and there and tweaked a bit it would make an excellent slight parody/joke. Unfortunately you couldn't balance humor and seriousness that well, and the result made me laugh on the sheer ridiculosness. Or simply caused me to bang my head aginst the table. It was just uneven. Seemed unnatural and kinda rushed.
Second of all...the spelling. Hey, I understand 'no Beta-reader' but Beta-reader and common sense (aka extra 10 minutes to reread something, calmly, with a cup of tea nearby) is not the same. You know, my English is intermediate, so when I notice badly constructed sentences it's probably sign something is not exactly right _ Wrong spelling of characters' names irks me a bit as well.
...by now you're probably wondering why I bothered to write all of it at all...it's just that I caught few scenes I thought were funny/adorable and made me smile. The plague of fanfiction writers since ancient times, I guess - good idea, but lack of skill/patience to write it. _
Again, sorry if I offended you, that wasn't my intention.
| crusnik O2 chapter 21 . 6/1/2009
;_; Oh god... Abel...!
This was an amazing story! -clutch- You have to post the epilouge... Its going to be amazing, I know it will -hug-
-crying- Oh Abel... ;_;...
You know... this would have made a great ending for the anime -hug- I mean every word of that. Your writing is simply breath-taking!
| crusnik O2 chapter 20 . 6/1/2009
;_; Omg... -hug- This chapter was amazing...
I have to read the next one!
| Seirei Nightlord05 chapter 21 . 5/30/2009
Hi...Just read the two latest chapter...
So, Abel finally cross the River Styx with Lilith?
I'll await for the epilogue and I hope it be a happy ending for the Nightlords since Chapter 20 and 21 is (forgive the expressions) a little bit too angst and sad...
And is the world now ruled by the NIghtlords (Cain and Seth)?Please tell...Take care...
| TrinityBloodFan chapter 21 . 5/24/2009
Hm. A bit super-naturaly at the end there...but it's a nice wrap to the story. Good job from completeing it.
| eiyria chapter 19 . 1/3/2009
love it! I can't wait to read more. Plz update soon.
| Seirei Nightlord05 chapter 19 . 12/10/2008
Hey,thought you didn't update the story...Guess I just got a little busy to check the updates,sorry...Nice chapter, a little bit poetry but prefect blending...Please no major character death, can't truly of anyone deserving death except Cardinal Medici and the scientists that experiments on the Nightlords...Keep up the good work,update soon...Bye2...
| crusnik O2 chapter 19 . 12/8/2008
Yay! You updated! It was a little confusing untill the end, but I got the just of it. xP and yeah. what an cliffy. your evil you know? xD haha anyway, Update soon! I cant wait to find out what happens! -fangirl scream as I chase after abel, but abel gets away so I shrug and tackle glomp cain to the floor-:D! Ack mein Gott! (oh my god!) I think I caught a german crusnik!:D -sitting on him- mwuhaha!
xD sorry, I'll be going now. Byes! Update soon! -walks off dragging cain (cain- x.x) behind me- _