Reviews for Jurassic Park The Beginning
kitten198485 chapter 2 . 6/2
will this story be being updated? I am really enjoying it
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 6/2
page 2 ch 1

So tht was the reason to be changed the rating . ok it is now at least easyer perhaps to be found by this rating .

Is that numbered Raptor to be so called Alexlater known as Tyrano . And here are the clans of bue/white/brown/green . It varies just like the human's skin colour and gene .

Maybe the blue raptor with wings is Silver Claw or his predsestors .

Is that Cassandra who was foulnd by Kary later ?

Still what obout Tessa the human and Tessa the raptor ?
Dustchu chapter 2 . 11/3/2013
Holy crap! What happened! don't leave us hanging! *yells as cat tackles me for no reason* DANG IT CREEPER!

Nice chapter though and great work, I am loving this! :D keep it up buddy! :D
Dustchu chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Wow, awesome! :D Good work and awesome job my friend! :D Weepah! this was written really good, keep it up! :D
phantomgamer21 chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
Uh... what happened did the author die? This was in 2008 oh come on I finaly fined a good story Android ts incomplte same with broken lives UPDATE PLZ!
old chuck chapter 2 . 3/7/2013
I have plans for Wu so tell me if your going to kill him off!
InGenworker chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
Really good start, could be as good as broken lives one day. You are still writing arent you?
midnight84118 chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
great story hope to see/read more keep it up and great job on it
lildino chapter 2 . 12/24/2009
WHAT which one died
darthdragon chapter 2 . 8/21/2009
This is good.

ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
FeenyFan4ever chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
Wow! This is great so far! Please don't leave it hanging!
The Cowgirl Bookworm chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
I like this story please update soon!
twilightangel14 chapter 2 . 7/9/2008
i like this chapter i hope that soon we start to learn if any of these little raptors are the bigs ones from your other story
GenomeSoldier chapter 2 . 6/28/2008
So your doing a prequel to Broken Lives too eh! Interesting start! Also the botanist named Cassandra isn't that the name of the alpha female of the brown packs?
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Hm...Definitely has potential, I'll keep an eye out for what happens next!
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