Reviews for Lost Son of Konoha
vmage2 chapter 6 . 6/21
An interesting premise but the spelling and grammar hurts to read. Please get a Beta reader.
lou2003us chapter 33 . 6/20
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
demonic hellfire chapter 33 . 6/20
Thank God you didn't go with the One-Winged Angel.
Zoran Dawn-Eclipse chapter 33 . 6/20
You did an excellent job at doing Genesis's performance! I could visualize the entire thing!

Amazing job on the chapter!
buterflypuss chapter 33 . 6/20
good chap
The Crimson Apocrypher chapter 33 . 6/20
Other than confusing the Meifu no O/King of Hell statue (the one that's used for resurrecting the Paths' bodies if/when they "die" in battle) with the Gedo Mazo/Demonic Statue of the Outer Path (the Ten Tails' husk-body/container of extracted bijuu), your work is chugging along nicely. Always good to see an underappreciated crossover get more work whenever it shows up.
FireKitsune1 chapter 33 . 6/20
If you're looking for good ps2 games, I highly recommend Dark cloud 1 and 2. Very good games.
DarkRavie chapter 33 . 6/20
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
Jebest4781 chapter 33 . 6/20
man... this was so damn awesome! I enjoyed the fight here and it went well on what you did. hope to see more on what will happen with the new player on the board as he cleared off many opposing ones
I am thou chapter 29 . 6/17
Since when this turn out to be persona 4 and kingdom hearts mix. Haha.. But it's kinda hilarious and interesting (?) anyway good work.
Zoran Dawn-Eclipse chapter 32 . 4/22
Finally! Genesis has made his appearance!

Read this entire story in about three days, so I can assure you that I'm enjoying every second of it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Also, poor Bii... Wonder if Cloud will grow his wing back and fly himself and Naruto off the island? Or maybe Cid might bail them out?
jangoman1579 chapter 9 . 4/9
Really? Really?! REALLY?! A fucking clone! That is as worst as Menma
jangoman1579 chapter 6 . 4/9
That whole memory thing was unnecessary and there was no point in it! All the memories where all random! No correlation to what happened to him in the nightmare realm with Itachi! Nothing to show her what had happened just showing his background which is very invassive, you also didn't need to show all of that! If going with this kind of memory route you should have just shown the parts with him and sephiroth and aerith
jangoman1579 chapter 5 . 4/9
Don't mess with the personalities of the characters like that. Gaara wouldn't of had an icha icha book on him or want one and Itachi wouldn't be laughing like that. Kisame yes but not Itachi. And why did you have Kisame die like that or more importantly what was the point of having them in the village! There is no reason for them to be there so the fight you created makes no sense besides just doing it because they are criminals who wouldn't/shouldn't have any reasons for going there. Even if it is to see or find Naruto/Cloud (which don't even get me started on the fact you made it so he forgot his old life and became A WHOLE OTHER PERSON) they wouldn't be stupid enough to talk with him in public like that
BlackCrystal06 chapter 32 . 4/4
Oh... Genesis huh
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