Reviews for Plot, Subplot
PhoenixWytch chapter 3 . 1/17/2011
I actually like the Operative a tiny bit, so I really hope he's truly on Mal's side.

Thanks for writing. I look forward to reading more when you post it.
MLN chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
Hello!

What will happen next in Chapter 4? It's been so long since it's been updated.
Growl Snarl chapter 3 . 1/27/2008
Oh! Very interesting so far, and now I want more :D

I really like the fact that you brought in the Operative and the other academy people. Really curious as to what you plan to do with them though. How are Mal and Crew going to go against them without River?
MLN chapter 3 . 10/24/2007
Great chapter! I hope they do find River before it's too late. I wonder what Mal will do to the ones who took her? Looking forward to the next chapter
Roman Paladin chapter 3 . 10/2/2007
Glad to see a new chapter in this story. Super Operative huh? Man, poor Serenity crew just can't catch a break can they?

Hope to see more!
Gwenfrewi72 chapter 3 . 10/2/2007
oh, that'll teach 'em to take his woman. I can't wait for the thrillin' heroics.

My only concern is, that any plan always seems to go pear shaped on 'em.
just slummin chapter 3 . 10/2/2007
Ah, you're stealing my heart by bringing in the Operative. You know I love him! Great work! :)
Roman Paladin chapter 2 . 9/23/2007
I'm on pins and needles! Please tell me River gets to shoot someone soon!
just slummin chapter 2 . 9/21/2007
Yikes! What a cliffhanger! More soon, please!
Gwenfrewi72 chapter 2 . 9/21/2007
OH man, a cliffy. You're killing me!
MLN chapter 2 . 9/21/2007
Ah! Cliffhangar! Who is it? And why didn't River know? Are they in major trouble? Can't wait for the next part.
Jarvey chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Well... that's somewhat unsettlin'
Buffybot76 chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Was recced this fic and I have read everything leading up to this and all I can say is WOW. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. _
MLN chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
that so doesn't look good. what a cliffhanger! looking forward to the next part
Gwenfrewi72 chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Oh go se! This cannot be good.
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