Reviews for Shadows Within: Storms
woodlandfairykirk chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
creepy Al... :O
Amethyst2241 chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
Wow, that was pretty awesome writing! It was pretty interesting seeing evil Al, also scary as hell... XD

I mean, come on! How could he kil Ed! And then at the end I'm all like "NOOOO don't kill Winry toooooooooo!" So depressing...I loved it so much!


Yes I do realize this review made no sense...
daffydonalddueymickey chapter 2 . 4/25/2011
Omg... Never knew Al could be so cruel... Shocking but anyways... Darn you Al! You killed Ed and stole his body! I can never forgive you! Great story btw :D (Edo fangirl forever!)
flYegurl chapter 2 . 5/25/2010
meanie! how could you make Al so evil? he's the most soft-hearted, kind, innocent boy you could ever meet! BOZO!
zutarababe chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
whoa! awesome story!
SesshyShadowSatoshiSonic chapter 2 . 4/7/2008
WOWZA! this is great! The description of the blood, Winry's expression, and Al's insanity, is just effin amazing! Dont change a thing, youre awesome!
EdxAyumi FAN chapter 2 . 3/19/2008
Ding dong, the bitch is dead, nihaha~ But srsly, one of yer best, uh, twoshots...
EdxAyumi FAN chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Reviewing again cuz I'm feel like it...the bottom ain't bolded here either o.o
Amaris Sirtsema chapter 2 . 1/18/2008

You really know how to make people depressed, Ayumi-chan.


I just feel like crying now...

Man, I feel like a wimp XD


Amaris Sirtsema chapter 1 . 1/18/2008


That was pure genius!


I can't believe Alphonse would do that o-0


That was awsome.

-high fives- SWEET STORY!
Moofy-Fan chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
0_0 probably the best thing ever! love love love it! Pure awesome, that's all I have to say.
Griselda Banks chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
Wow...I...just finished reading Dude, I must be deranged, psychotic, and homicidal too, because I loved this! *runs away screaming and crying*

Okay, there's a certain kind of fic that I like to both read and write, a kind that is full of morbidity, character torture, etc. And this... Okay, I'm at a loss for words, except that this is going on my favorites!

It's not that I like Al being a homicidal maniac, nor that I like him killing Ed, nor that I agree with AlXWin, but... Just that this is showing Al's darker side, which I truly believe he has, though he hides it from the world, makes me love this story to pieces.

Actually, not too long ago, I wrote a fic where Al kills Ed, too. I haven't put it up yet, but if you're interested, keep your eyes peeled for a fic called, "The Death of You."

So, for the sequel, should I put this on my story alert list, or is it a completely different story? What's it called?
EdxAyumi FAN chapter 2 . 9/28/2007
XO Ed, no! T.T Alu, how could you kill your own brother? XO And Winry...but who cares about her!
Evil Little Dog chapter 2 . 9/27/2007

This is the end? *is confused*

It doesn't feel like an end to me. Hm.
agent000 chapter 2 . 9/24/2007
Heh, this story's definitely interesting, but I still say that I can't imagine Al acting like that, lol. You can write what you want, and I'll read it and be entertained by it, but I still can't imagine Al acting like that, hehe. It's good though, I won't deny that. Should be interesting to see what else you come up with.
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