Reviews for Party of Three
jhian casey chapter 7 . 4/26
wooooaaahhhhh! i got crazy over this one!
damn! SOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOTTTTTT!
naruto and sakura is one hell of a thing! but with sasuke?! damn! ultimate destruction! hahahaha
this fic really made my toes curl and my body feel ultimately HOT!
one thing i suggest though.. why not make kakashi join the fun!? hahahahahahah
kakasaku is sooooooo fucking hot as well.!
damn! im really going crazy!
J-POP i envy your mind! hahahah hope you'll write more narusakusasu fics! lemon or not..;)
(p.s. i prefer naruto than sasuke.. his is bigger..LOL)
thanks! thanks J-POP! awesome job!
NtheRuF chapter 7 . 2/7
THIS IS SOOO HOT ITS IN MY TOP THREE! MAYBE EVEN #1! EXCELLENT STORYTELLING! A WOMANS PERSPECTIVE! AS ONLY A WOMEN CAN EXPRESS! MEN READ THIS IF YOU WANT TO LEARN! THE MORE YOU SPOIL THE WOMAN THE MORE SHE WILL SPOIL YOU!
J-POP PRINCESS I CAN SEE WHY THEY STEAL THIS STORY! IT'S OBVIOUS YOU ARE A WOMAN OTHER WOMEN ENVY! YOU GO GIRL!

This story is soooooo good I couldn't even comment until it was over. I wish it would NEVER END! But then what girl wouldn't! I think the best thing about it is that it is so actually conceivable! And in my mind it would work exactly as it played out here! Of course with the three of them there would be fights... real ones! But they wouldn't be strong enough to tear them apart. And as stubborn and frustratingly pig headed as Sasuke can be even he wouldn't be able to ever truly walk away now. I just kept thinking that after hearing them the 1st night... and knowing the freak he is with his sex stories in his hand ALL THE TIME... he wouldn't even be able to resist the oh so live version of his favorite students going on! Yes... I see Kakashi lingering outside if not peeking on the windows... or shadow cloning into some piece of furniture (like a bed lol) so he could watch! Should he be allowed to join? Umm I think it's pretty perfect the way it is and Sakura may not survive another libido to satisfy!
oOtsmOo chapter 7 . 7/7/2014
oh gosh this was great 3 I would actually love to see a poly relationship with these 3 if there is a sequel . you are an amazing writer!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/28/2014
woah...that was intense!
guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
nice, except for "once we start i can't promise you we'll be able to stop"

that made me uncomfortable, b/c what was basically just said was "after we get far enough along, you loose the right to withdraw your consent and now owe us sex" - and that's a whole world of wrong.

I have no doubt that you don't mean it this way, but lines like that in fan fiction and other mediums contribute to rape culture regardless of the author's intent. What they teach us is that men, once adequately aroused are no longer to be held accountable for their actions.

honestly, it doesn't matter how far you get. I don't care if penetration has already occurred, I don't care if you're nearly finished, the right to say "stop" and have that be respected will always remain. no one is ever obligated to carry out what they've started. Ever.

When you have a character say something along the lines of "I couldn't stop even if I wanted to", you're basically having him say "it sure is a good thing you're consenting to this, because otherwise we'd have a serious problem on our hands, and that really wouldn't be my fault at all."

when you have a character say something like "last chance to change your mind" or "If we go any further I might not be able to stop" you're portraying him as a nice guy for telling his partner "If we don't stop, I might rape you. which again would not be my fault because hey, I warned you didn't I?"

having guys written as mindless animals who may or may not rape you is not sexy. it's scary.
teaching people that after a certain point, the right to say "no" somehow goes away is also scary.
having either arousal or silence be interpreted as consent is equally not sexy and equally scary.
this needs to stop, and it needs to stop now.

So try to be conscious of what you're writing, and how it may be interpreted. I believe you were unaware of the implications of the line, but promoting rape culture is never harmless.

thank you for your time, and sorry about the rant.
guest chapter 6 . 3/3/2014
the anus is full of bacteria, bacteria that, while perfectly healthy and unable to cause any problems in the anus, should not be introduced to the vaginal area ( or anywhere else on the body really, if you get right down to it )
basically, anal to vaginal sex ( oral or otherwise ) can lead to a whole crap load of infections.
vaginal to anal is fine ( nothing in the vagina will hurt or infect the anus), but anal to vaginal is a pretty big no-no health wise.
this has been a PSA.
E chapter 7 . 12/9/2013
:)
Kendimo chapter 7 . 8/31/2013
Lol tf did I just read was this porn...this story is crazy
MiaIsBoredAKF chapter 7 . 6/26/2013
Please update SOON
ClumsyPinkTiger chapter 7 . 1/30/2013
Unbearably hottttttttt. There aren't enough Ts at the end of hottttttttttttttttt to describe this, so here are some more: tttttttt. Threesomes just always seem so off balance, but your way of portraying NaruSakuSasu here is just poetic, albeit very raunchly so. It is lovely.
EmD23 chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
63K of nothing but porn. That's quite impressive.

It was also telling how different sex was with each guy. With Sasuke it was hot and full of lust but there was an underlying current on emotion when she was with Naruto.

I do have to wonder how it eventually settled itself once Sasuke found himself someone to revive his clan with, though.
another.creative.lover chapter 7 . 8/7/2012
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! SAKURA'S CHOICE TO DO SOMETHING WITH NARUTO IS SO AWESOME.

Sasuke Naruto Sakura weapon of mass seduction. x_x

I died. SERIOUSLY THERE'S SO MUCH ORAL THAT I CAN'T EVEN STAND IT. Love it so much. o3o

... (kicks the people who actually had the nerve to steal your story) Obviously they aren't creative enough to come up with their own. e_e
another.creative.lover chapter 6 . 8/7/2012
o3o
... I gotta say, I'm totally in love with Naruto's dedication to giving Sakura the time of her life. XD
OMIGOD THAT MIRROR THING (loves). That is sooo erotic. _

Heh-heh-heh. Naruto lost! I guess he's going to be giving up some of his sexual freedom for Sakura to deal with him, heh-heh.
another.creative.lover chapter 5 . 8/7/2012
Hmm... a no strings attached kind of thing? Somehow I don't believe it.
(shrugs) Well, it is Sasuke. He does care about her. But it's more lust than love at this point. XD

... or so he says.

In all the year I have worked with you three, I have never seen you work together so poorly, except for the first day I tested you.
... I was going to say he should have seen them the other night in bed, but I'm sure he wouldn't want to, not matter how many Icha Icha novels he's gone through.
another.creative.lover chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
XD
"Like what you see? I'm sure I'm not the only one who looks good wet. Come here and join me."
HECK YEAH I'D WANT TO JOIN YOU.

XD I love how Naruto's teasing Sasuke about his sexuality.

"I must say, I've never made a girl pass out before." XD Of course, Sasuke. Everyone has their firsts.
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