Reviews for Memories Reborn
sky sand chapter 6 . 12/30/2015
BeckaR chapter 6 . 5/3/2011
Awesome story so far I love it can't wait for more please
mrock10 chapter 6 . 10/14/2010
Just leave it like this its SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! You have to write more! And SOON!
Evergreen4747 chapter 6 . 1/29/2010

Great start! But I think that Bella showing her true self comes to soon, later on would give better suspense. I like your second idea, edward falling for Kate. But that's up to you.

Looking forward to a next chap.

Greetings from Belgium :-)
begana chapter 6 . 10/11/2009
No i like this part...its kind of cool if you think about it acctually happening. I dont think you should change it. Maybe you should add some more details about her sobbing in the park and stuff and then maybe after she changes back into bella you could write how she just stood there in shock before whispering "Uh Oh" in an innocent voice and then bolting...just a suggestion
lips-like-morphinee chapter 6 . 10/1/2009
this story is really good please continue dont stop i love it

TheTordNation chapter 6 . 7/14/2009
I love it the way it is! it so incredbly awesome! oh I think i spelled 'incredbly' worng... oh well
taffylover123 chapter 6 . 6/7/2009
I think that Bella shouldn't reveal herself yet. Maybe when she and the Cullens are closer.
ggroks1800 chapter 6 . 5/23/2009
I think he should fall in love with Kate and the Bella will like hate him when for you know falling in love with someone elseand say like 'so i didn't mean anything to you' and stff like that and then after a while they fall back in love ecetera ecetera. :) mwah im loving the story at the moment KEEP WRITING
JessieIero chapter 6 . 4/3/2009

y did she run away tho? edward still loves her,im confuzzled?

wuv jessie
carecare007 chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
r u ever going to update? i really love the story i just want u to write another chapter plzz!
YouNeverKnow5 chapter 6 . 2/15/2009
Well I like the story I was just wondering kate like a different person our is she bella I dont get it cuz you said that edward falls in love with kate but isn't kate bella? PLEASEE write back or somthing!
kaliy-moon07 chapter 6 . 1/29/2009
i think she revealed herself a little to soon and i also think that it was also the right time too. but its your story and i like it the way it is.
No1Longer1using1account chapter 6 . 1/25/2009
i think you should redo the chapter but instead of getting to know each other more you could get someone to say something that causes her alot of pain and so she wont be able to control her form but then changs back to bella by accident
FutureGirl04 chapter 6 . 12/31/2008
I like it this way but whatever your the writer! It will be good either way. But i love how she runs away it makes the story better. I want so badly for Edward to run after her. Please keep the story the way it was! Either way though i waill keep reading so please keep writing!
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