Reviews for Waiting for Luna
Bob Schlobohm chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
I know you wrote this eight years ago but it has me crying like a baby. I'm a 64 year old male and have been a bit weepy since my heart attacks but never like this. Admittedly I'm a huge Luna fan but this really moved me. I almost don't want to read anymore of your work in case something else hits me this strongly. Love,Bob.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
This should be labeled as tragedy...
Bertram Wooster chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
I just got goosebumps reading that. Hats off to you!
Yudachi chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
This must be the first and /only/ fanfiction poem I've ever read. Good job.
seriesreader chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Loveland chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Very good! I really like it. It captures how Luna's father felt during the DH, and how it must hurt for parents' to lose their child.
Dafydd chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Ouch! That hurt! Such a tear-jerker. Xcellent. It does what it says on the can.
emmalemon10 chapter 1 . 10/16/2007

that was beautiful! so sad...

you make me cry.

but you did a good job!
bonnie-incognito chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Oh, he SO wants to believe that she'll be coming back! I like the repetition at the end of every verse and that change at the end was brilliant! All the different thoughts and descriptions of Luna were VERY nice too. _
tegmel chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Oh that was a beautiful lament there. I got a bit teary and have recieved a few funny looks from the family. Luna has always been one of my favourite characters, its wonderful to see 'her' through the eyes of someone who loves her so much, sad but beautiful.
fairydustandcansofspam chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Wow... That's so sad. I nearly cried, especially at the end stanza. This was amazing. Wow. That's all I can say.
Bad Mum chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Oh I loved that. I love the repetition of Luna being down by the river, adn the wistful references to her mother.
InsanityInside chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
"But Luna isn't here right now

She's down by the river

Catching Plimpies for dinner

She'll be back soon"

Wow... He *really* wants to believe it...

TheFeelOfFlow chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Great! You have used simple words to mean just the right thing, and you have got a knack with words! Simple and very effective piece of work... great job!
anahitathebooklover chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
cool... this made me really sad... gr8 work!
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