Reviews for Jealous Thoughts
Pink Pagoda chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
awe man that was really good! hehe they fell off the roof... *hearts good story!
IchigoKurosaki-sama chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Oh, naughty! I loved it! Ichiruki forever!
Affinitive chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
You just gotta love Ichigo(:
soulterror chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
lol loved it _ great job
Goku's Daughter chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Yes, I'd love a cookie!

*m

There were many good lines in this:

/They’d bend over backwards for any piece of ass./

And though I don't like OOC, I didn't find this OOC-like hahaha. I love Jealous!Ichigo. And I think you did a wonderful job with this. This actually reminds me of fillers (though this fic was mae last year) of when that little girl had to get marries and Rukia said something about Ichigo having no idea about nobles... but it was never elaborated.

But I love what Ichigo says to her to cheer her up, and the insults before that - that she would make a terrible wife...

You have good flow and good writing and this was humourous IchiRuki love! I don't have any complaints.

Off to read the Rukia version.
Inazagi chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Dear lord, this was just as good as the Rukia version!

I loved the personallities, the perfect characterisations, and not to mention the hidden sensuallity, that was only *just* hinted at towards the end - despite the kiss!

Stabbing with a twig? I snorted with laughter! It just reminds me so much of Urahara poking Ichigo with his cane!

All the best and I hope for more amazing IchiRuki stories!

Anna x
Digital Chocolate chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
wow, i've read a lot of make-out-y fics, and... this is the best one yet!
Zapenbits chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Heyy, reviewing again!

Haha, this is so great! I love your writing style and you do such a good job at writing kissing scenes! [swoons] I love them!

Anyway, I loved the whole part at the beginning when he was rattling off guy's names who liked Rukia. I was like, "[nods] Yeah..him too, and him, goodness! Rukia's too lucky!/!"

Haha, great oneshot! I'm looking forward to your update in "Indefinately"!
Aibhlin chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Really liked it. You wrote jealous Ichigo very well. :)
Sky Shark X2 chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Very good fan fiction, good character interaction and ending.
bliiss14 chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
holy freaking hollow shit.

GENIUS!

this whole story was so amazing, i laughed and giggled and aw'd all the way threw it!

great job!
KimP chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
Brillent. I loved it. It was so so cute and sweet.
CherryBlossom-Ren chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
It was hilarious, that is so Ichigo!
VintageBeautyx chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
LOL. The ending was hilarious xD.

So this was your first written kiss/make-out scene? It's awesome, haha.

And replying to your reply for Insecurities:

Lol, hard to stop writing and overdoing it, eh?

- SerenityxAngel.
HeyyBabyy chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
LOL. Very Good! xD
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