|Reviews for Nightingale|
| crimson chapter 16 . 12/22/2009
omg this is chapter THIS FIC! suspenseful action, the rich history, neji caught in the web of that history and politics and loyalties-ah! and the plot is especially fast movng this chapter; neji's "waking up"! i'm at the edge of my seat anticipating what he's gonna decide to do! wonderful fic and eagerly awaiting more!
| inaaaaaactive chapter 16 . 12/22/2009
Please, please, please update soon! This is AMAZING!
| Nightelfknight chapter 16 . 12/10/2009
This story takes my breath away. I have never seen another author portray these characters the way that you do. The details that you add-Neji and Hanabi's relationship, Neji's genin team, the freaky mindfuckery that is Orochimaru-it all makes the plot fascinating and compelling. This story is incredibly unique and you are a very, very talented writer.
I have one question though, is this story in the same verse as 'Mistake' and its sequel? I was rereading today and it just seems to fit so well..
Please don't abandon this story! I love it and am desperate to know what happens to Neji next!
| secret-wildcard chapter 16 . 12/10/2009
I've stumbled over this story on accident, but I've got to say, that it is really one of the best I've read.
The way you approach this story, portray the characters, go about constructing Neji's unique eyes and the whole all-around really had me going through all chapters in one go.
I'm fascinated with the ideas you come up.
You've gained my serious respect.
I'm waiting for the next chapter(s) and am curious to see what you come up with next and how all of this is going to continue... and end.
| yonne1104 chapter 16 . 12/6/2009
...Hm, besides the fact that you write like an elite college student -maybe you are- that ending as the only thing i didnt understand enough to question you ... and for a sophomore who took more than a week and no less than two to read Wuthering Heights -i read really fast- the most arduous copywright i've ever tried to apprehend...-
Thats surprising.. But nevertheless... “Don’t make my mistake.”
“Make my own,” he finished. Was a little confusing.
Question: (and if your answer is yes, then i understand; if no please explain it to me?) Was when he said “Don’t make my mistake.” to Neji Itachi speaking in his body? -and then -if so- Neji replied with "Make my own" Correct?
If im right then i fully understand -so apparenty Itachi admits he made some sort of mistake and telling Neji not to when he gets his revenge or whatever from his family -then, if im right, Itachi MUST tell me what mistake he made... I WANNA KNOW!
ONe more important uestion: I found this story in spite of my sudden burst in the yaoi Sasuke/Neji because they are both prodigies of their clan -minus missing-nin- and both have a numerous amount of fangirls that they despise... So i thought; Hm, lets put them together. So i come in search of a good one with well grammar and punctuation -and, to tell the truth, something far similiar to 10th grade or hgher status... ALAS! I find one - but this particular story has left one nagging question in the back of my head that refuses to ... um... defuse until i find the answer...
IS THIS A NEJISASUKE FANFIC OR NOTR! IF NOT, PLEASE TELL ME SO I CAN STOP LOOKING FOWARD TO SOME FEELINGS SPARKING BETWEEN THE TWO! PLEASE!
If so, this is awesome that you dragged it out so far...but please go no farther im begging you...
Once again if not i will still read it becasue it is extremely ineresting and well written -and maybe should be under itachi/neji becuase they mention the two more than the latter...
One more question-or two: Do you plan on being a writter in the future? -and- If so i would love some advice from such a brilliant writter! I wouldnt say better because imnot all tht smart in critisizing copywrights, but your work is so much better reading than Stephenie Meyers. She uses so much metaphors and similies that her writting is ipiciablly lovely-much like yourself...
Sorry for the long review, but its just i was a tad late in catchoing up seeing as im reviewing from 16th chapter -what you had wen i found it-which was yeasterday. I'm bit of a rant and i admit some of this should have been a pm, but i cantcopy&paste a pm so you have this -terribly sorry if its so troublesome that you had to drag yourself to read it all so ans not to e evil writter and loving all your reviewers and whatnot, but-
Eheh! i forgot what i wanted to say... Um, sorry for being such a rant? Yeah,, maybe... Js ne
I hope your updates dont suffer for you falling into comas and stuffs like that -It hapens alot, and the fact is i love this story to much for it to take nearly two months for each update... Please reconsider and get somekind of medical aid -or steal-if such is a case for you too.. AHeheh, well, im done -for now... Ja ne.. -i said that haven't i? Oh yeah, i should stop.. Um- STOP! -Right!.. Ja- GOODBYE ALREADY!
| Reizo Hayashi chapter 16 . 11/16/2009
Still here! haha I remember way back when you first started this story, as well as the two predecessors!
Love it as always, keep it up! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
| PervadeTheSilence chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
I found a link to this on Deviantart. Love it. Neji has always been my favorite Naruto character. Can't wait to read the rest :D
| LovelyWeather chapter 7 . 11/11/2009
As soon as I read the title it was obvious who's he gonna meet next. Orochimaru is one sick f*ck, I really have no idea why I like him so much. You sure know how to write him. 8D
I was very annoyed with the fact that Sasuke's beating Neji so effortlessly... God, when I just recall the first Naruto episodes when Sasuke couldn't even beat Lee! Neji may be a rare Jounin from the Rookie Nine, but they really downgraded his strenght in Shippuuden. :'-(
| LovelyWeather chapter 5 . 11/11/2009
Oh my... this was scary. O.O
You are most definitely the number 1 action writer.
| LovelyWeather chapter 4 . 11/11/2009
A kill Sasuke! Kill the Duck-butt! You go Neji! Oh, and kill Kabuto, mwahahaha *coughs* Ok, I'm done now. xD
| LovelyWeather chapter 3 . 11/11/2009
Your descriptions amaze me: 'There was a storm of origami sparrows, wings tipped in razor blades and whirling crazily in his chest, tearing delicate rips in his resolve, letting it leak like blood, hot and acrid into his system' is one of my fave sentences ever.
And... Shomoto Tenten? xD xD xD Did you just give Tenten a surname? Hahaha, brilliant! It was about time she got a freaking surname. xD LOL!
The battle scene with Itachi is breathtaking. I like both characters and was on the edge of fangirlism. xD
| LovelyWeather chapter 2 . 11/11/2009
Oh... my... Ra... Sound? Orochimaru? Poor Neji, having to become a scape-goat. Gods, now I just HAVE to find out what happens next!
Oh, and 'fear of flowers' and his conversation with Sakura? Flawless, genius, dot. xD
| LovelyWeather chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
I've just started reading this story and I already love it! I always kinda liked Neji, but now it's on a whole new level. 8D Everything is so real I almost believed it's canon! O.o The relationship between Hanabi and Neji is very interesting to read and the OC Mizuki almost seems like a real person, and being his grandmother she acts accordingly to her role.
What I like the most, however, are the titles of your chapters. I'm into psychology and wanna study phobias so this really caught my interest. It's VERY original, congrats. _
Ja ne *continues to read the story*
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 16 . 11/4/2009
wow. awesome story. please update soon.
| Solosan chapter 16 . 10/24/2009
Holy blue shit on a pineapple.
That is one scary long ass complex, subtle telling of an angsty story.