Reviews for Two Women
Yume Hanabi chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Aww so sweet!
Cataclysmic Eclipse chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
That was so sweet! There's so little Susanne fanfiction out there, I'm so glad you contributed to it. It was very nicely done, cute ending.
Ark Navy chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Ah, finally. A fic featuring Susanne! That may seem to be an odd exclamation, but truly think she's a bit underrated as far as fanfiction goes. Not only that, but there's so much one could write about her, I think.

Enough about that though. This fic was exceptionally cute, and the descriptions fit well with the mood you were trying to create. I was a bit disappointed at the lack of total interaction between the Lady and Tear, but it more or less contributes to that mood as well, so I shouldn't complain.

"Even if he does, he will be a different boy now. I am not sure that I can stand having a different boy come home once again." Such a well said line when it comes to this situation, and even in the real world, really. Excellant. Simply excellant.

::adds to favs::