Reviews for Screams Part Four: Cause and Effect
SnuggleKitten69 chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
Truly amusing end.

Yes, I am a bit twisted.
Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
oh dear... desseert...
lounger chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
raka chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
love it...

Love the stories "Screams" universe...

Don't get me wrong. I AM sad about what happened to them... But I do love the gritty torture and killings in the story...
xBloodSplatter chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Beautiful, this chapter is art.
VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
This definately earns it title of 'horror'. Totally creepy, and excellently presented, as always. Those scars on Harry's face are very distinct to your storyline, and Hermione's unsteady walk is, too. Fantasticly dark!
pstibbons chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Ah, bliss! This Hermione's insanity is truly scary and magnifique.

Was Shack Harry in disguise?

Best lines:

H G:“It’s cause and effect. You keep us apart – that’s the cause – and I’ll watch as my Smiling Man snaps your bones – that’s the effect.”

C L:“Did you have anything to do with her apparent murder?”

H G:“How can it be only ‘apparent’ you dimwit? The bitch’s entrails were strung about the house. Is there some natural cause that will make people expel their intestines that I don’t know about?”

The one who was the first to rape me; he didn’t like eating his own genitals – the expression he made was priceless, but he didn’t have a choice in the matter.
Mini-Chobi chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
... holy shit.

Hermione's gone insane O.O And what's Kingsley playing at - letting her go?
No Tama chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
To be truly honest this series of oneshots are really good, I truly like reading it, this one was awesome like the others before ... hope to read another chap in this storyline.

And keep on with this side of you as a writer is really good.
irish gal 2 chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
Man, these things can be so disturbing but, they are written so well!
Ultimate Auror chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
I love you. I love you. I love you.

While this one was not as action packed as the others, the creep value was still mile high. The torn emotions that Hermione experiences throughout the interview is captivating. The tears, the insanity, the loss, the madness, the calmness. Gives me the chills all over again.

I wonder why Kingsley was foolish enough to remove her. Not like it would have mattered anyway, they would have found each other eventually. But do they really think that they can save the fallen hero's? Is there really any hope left for them? I don't think so...

Can't wait to get to the next installment, your ability to depict fear and gore across the pages is beautifully sinful. I await your next move.



PS - Don't forget about SoG, I still love that one too! :o)
Meteoricshipyards chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Quite horrific.

Too bad Hermione and Harry have gone from killing those who deserve it to those who don't.

Personally, I think this has about run it's course. It's time for the end; either they die or are healed. But that's my opinion.

Thanks for writing this.
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Twisted and fascinating, like watching a pickup splatter a schoolgirl.

Harry and Hermy are moving from being insane, but still mostly righteous and likable, to evil minor dark-lords.

If they killed Majorette Borge, they've crossed the line for sure.

Don't make us want to put the diabolical duo down. What will they be? Gory goombahs or rabid miscreants who should be killed on sight?