Reviews for Screams Part Four: Cause and Effect |
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![]() ![]() ![]() They both went totally insane. I hope they’ll somehow survive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so messed up but so cool my god |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is twisted. In a way, Harry and Hermione are scarier than Voldemort. I wonder if magic could heal their physical damage, scarring? I doubt they’d be interested, though Harry seemed like he wanted Hermione healthy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, what's the dessert |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok...O_O this chapter managed to completely terrify me...great writing. |
![]() ![]() OMG crazy good and gross too! Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() What 's for dessert? My crazy mind is conjuring so many things but I know it want be that u thought up my dear crazy writer.. That's y I like ur fic so much because I can't guess what comes next... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly amusing end. Yes, I am a bit twisted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh dear... desseert... |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it... Love the stories "Screams" universe... Don't get me wrong. I AM sad about what happened to them... But I do love the gritty torture and killings in the story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful, this chapter is art. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This definately earns it title of 'horror'. Totally creepy, and excellently presented, as always. Those scars on Harry's face are very distinct to your storyline, and Hermione's unsteady walk is, too. Fantasticly dark! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, bliss! This Hermione's insanity is truly scary and magnifique. Was Shack Harry in disguise? Best lines: H G:“It’s cause and effect. You keep us apart – that’s the cause – and I’ll watch as my Smiling Man snaps your bones – that’s the effect.” C L:“Did you have anything to do with her apparent murder?” H G:“How can it be only ‘apparent’ you dimwit? The bitch’s entrails were strung about the house. Is there some natural cause that will make people expel their intestines that I don’t know about?” The one who was the first to rape me; he didn’t like eating his own genitals – the expression he made was priceless, but he didn’t have a choice in the matter. |