|Reviews for Crossing the Line|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
I like this
| Moocky chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
I've seen Freedom Writers, so I'm familiar with this game Crossing The Line, and I think you captured the emotions and point of the game perfectly.
Also, this story is well written and alround perfect, I can't find any faults.
Well done :)
| CosaBella chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
I played this game last week, during staff training for a summer camp...except when they asked questions if it was something positive you took a step forward and if it was negative you took a step backward...it was crazy to see the different places people ended up considering that we all started at the same spot.
| Momma Lici chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
FLIPPIN'...*throws up hands* I am full of feels now, DAD-BLAST IT! I don't know what to do with them! *sobs grossly*
| tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
| auroraustralias chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Ooh, this is pretty sad, but it's written so well... Bee and Jazz probably have a lot to talk about now!
| jpgFury chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
this was beautifully done! need to go look up freedom writers...
| TheGhost129 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
o-o I want to play that game now...
| Alathea2 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Very, very thought provoking. I like the way Sam and Mikaela choose to be completely honest in front of the Autobots, that took courage. Heck, it would take courage to be honest in a game like that period. I liked the touch at the end where the 'Bots decide to share with them.
| moonlightbeam305 chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Very thought provoking and thoughtful...
It brought a whole new level of thinking to me.
Thank you for sharing this...
| ElementalFallenStar chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!
| SavvyEnigma chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
If I could fit the sound of ten thousand people applauding in this review, I would. Imagine the applause, and you have my review.
| CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
I've heard of this game somewhere before, though i didnt take sociology thats for sure and im pretty sure Ive not seen the film. It made for an interestng pivot for this little fic though. The reactions of everyone to each question and from the bots especially (and the two E.D. girls) were particularly good. Also the run up to the game itself made this fic a little more full bodied...i mean u could've just started with Jazz arriving with Mikaela and explaining about the culture part and not wanting to be bored in like a sentence...but then that wouldnt have made it so good to read. Kinda want to see more of this one you know...like a fllow on or something. Oh well..the ending was a good note to finish on and of course the interaction between characters and even the small look n on Ratchet was done well. So cheers :)
| DammitJim chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
A wonderful story wit ha wonderful message
| awalkingparadox chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Wow, I really like this, I wish you would write more on this.