Reviews for Second Chances: Unforgiving Past
MagicSwede1965 chapter 6 . 10/12/2007
Here's another winner! You write much better mysteries than I do, and have a great way of dropping clues through the story that reveal just enough to keep the reader guessing. And as always, the strong love for all the members of the extended Simon family radiates throughout each and every scene. Keep up the terrific work! :)
louise1717 chapter 6 . 9/18/2007
another great addition to the s&s fan fic.i like that we get so much rick and laurie.
merryw chapter 6 . 9/17/2007
Great story, as always! I particularly loved the abundance of brotherly moments in this one!
bionic4ever chapter 6 . 9/17/2007
What a sweet ending, finding Alex's parents (*sniffle*). The perfect big, red ribbon to tie it all together. This was a great story, start to finish. You kept the tension level high and brought the generations closer together. One of my favorites!
bionic4ever chapter 3 . 9/17/2007
I really like how the kids are getting to know more about their family history while helping with this case. Great inter-generational dialogue - it really rings true.