hopefully you'll uptade this but it's ok, it was great, I loved every part of this story
the whole take about how ghost are is I don't know, I really like it, how emotions are described and the angst is just marvelous
Although I whish to see danny finally reaching his breaking point and everything going wrong (bc I know it would be great in your writing), eventually everything getting better, and him happy with the people he cares about and all that
the little thing you were building in this story getting to a end, maybe that one ghost in the portal making Sam do a wish? vlad? what was he going to do at the end? or valerie was really going to be of any help?

in my head now danny is in an endless sleep because the story he belongs was never finished

loved it anyways!

oh, I thought it was finished

I love, love Vlads characterization

WOA

WHAIWHRIDBSJJDKE THIS IS SOSOOSIEHFI GOOD

finally he says no to them

I don't get how Sam blames herself. she's not the one who built a portal and then said it isn't working

Wtf they just RAN?! Sound like something my fake best friend would do...

Tell me why I laughed at the end lol

Ah... still wish this would be updated. I loved the darker look at this story; you did a fantastic job!

Enthralling, hope you pick this back up one day!

Wow, usually I don't read stories that haven't be updated in a while, but I saw you are updating other stories so I figured why the heck not. I'm so glad I read this, a fantastic work! I really hope this gets updated soon, I know it's a long shot but... It was too good to turn down reading.

Ive probably left a review before, but whatever. I have kinda fallen out of the danny phantom fandom a couple of years ago, and ive stopped reading fanfictions for it. THIS, however, i will never stop being a fan of. I remembered really liking this fic, and now im rereading it now for the third or fourth time. Words cannot express how much i adore this story. I love how creepy and hopeless everything feels, how you captured the characters while still making them feel believable and real. What i love most of all is the clever reconstruction of the show to make it somehow even creepier (vlad, for example, was somehow even scarier and even more sympathetic like how is that even possible?) And dont even get me started on the danny/ghost stuff. I love love love the moments where dannys true nature comes out, and i was fascinated by the whole "stopped talking about ghosts and started talking about us". I couldnt get enough of the nature of ghosts in your story, and ive been inspired by you. Im not here to ask for anything, i know you have a life to live and your probably long since out of this fandom. I just want you to know how much i adore your writing, and even though theres more to the story, ive had so much fun reading and rereading. Kudos!

Came on the recommendation of another writer on here. May I say I am utterly transfixed with your interpretation of ghost so far

Hoky shit this was great! I love iy! The Fentons /would/ so work for the government and omfs the wayit all got to how it is i justfeipwlbwkbsnvfnxibdjchdlwbdogsosydehhndyldostidtditrdiiddidotkgfhrcvwgw TBIS IS AMAZING