Reviews for Spiral
Guest chapter 5 . 2/17/2016
I read this fic and I must say...I'm really depressed. I'm actually all in tears, why did you killed tenten? It'd be such beautiful fic!
tentenn91 chapter 5 . 8/3/2015
I was so happy until I read that she died...I'm so depressed right now, god
Guest chapter 5 . 11/18/2014
Sweet Air chapter 4 . 1/28/2012
LOVED this chapter :D the ending? genius.
Young Goodman Brown chapter 5 . 10/27/2011
beautiful :') you made my heart cry for poor, poor heartbreakingly delusional neji. i think you should move it to your main page too, not necessarily because of the length but because the tone seems to be very different than that of the other oneshots here. (the other stories are more light-hearted or contemplative.) i barely caught the angst warning so i was (unpleasantly? pleasantly?) surprised...

but yes, i loved all your oneshots :) nice work~~
yuushibari chapter 4 . 5/11/2011
I really, really like this chapter.

Great concept, and your sexy paragraph's deserve applause. Standing ovation, if I may. Written brilliantly without being overly vulgar, but still retain the suggestiveness.
I Can Hear the Sea chapter 2 . 10/27/2010
I really liked this one-shot. It was very well written and gave us the insight on what Team Gai is really like. I also liked Lee's part, where everyone assumes he's ignorant, but he's really not. Great job! :)
Loneliars chapter 6 . 7/30/2010
my favorite one has to be the fifth oneshot. i felt my heart wrench. /

BUT. the sexy oneshots? oh yes. it made up for it. oh yes indeed. ;]

do moooreeee! 8D
Simple Rain chapter 5 . 10/12/2009
this was beautiful! this by far is my most favored oneshot! so sad, but still wonderful to read. i'm was tearing up inside when i read this. But the ending healed it

i had a feeling that she might have been dead with your use of past tense. it took a while, but whenever you spoke of her in past tense i was thinking on the title. then it clicked.

in regards of the other chapters, chapter 1 and 6 are very sexy. hahah don't know how else to described it. "punish me, tenten." haha loved that line and i guess neji would be the type that'd get off during a spar XD. coercion was funny. all for a jar of cookies. i guess i'd do that too. cookies are an addiction! and veritas was touching. there is truth and falsity in their actions.

i love this collection of oneshots. hope to read more
pkstarstorm chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
far to sad
pkstarstorm chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
ok i guess but they still need tweaking
pkstarstorm chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Okuyukashii chapter 5 . 7/9/2008
Aw, it was sad, but I love it. I had to read it a few times to figure out which was the one a year ago and which was the more recent one. I finally figured out that the italics was the one a year ago, where she had gotten killed, and the normal one was the recent one where she wasn't alive. I found that out after realizing out that she only interacted with Neji. Am I right? Great job on this story!
I-Heart-Hatake-Kakashi chapter 6 . 5/17/2008
wow... seriously, wow... hot!... I loved it; could totally envision Neji at the hotspring with this glazed look as he remembers where the scars came from, and Lee & Naruto just standing there arguing... good job!
Lauranthalsala chapter 6 . 4/30/2008

just... wow :D
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