|Reviews for Tension in the Laboratory|
| Guest chapter 24 . 5/26/2015
Rape is one hell of a 'moral boundary', and not even on the same planet as 'romance'. And to treat it so flippantly - it just seems like it was shoved into the story at the end - is an earmark for ignorance on the part of the writer.
Your premise was intriguing enough to start reading, but the entire thing shifted to confusing right after the first chapter, and from there it was just a matter of skimming through its entirety.
I think I get where you are coming from, (I mean, I certainly /hope/ I do. Anything else just renders the whole exercise rather nefarious), it's just that the time and care wasn't taken to fully explore even Snape's stunted idiosyncrasies. Which is a shame, considering the potential.
| Blue night fairy chapter 24 . 1/22/2015
I read this story and your copy on Adult fanfiction. I'm normally a fan of SS/HG but in this fic, I wish they didn't end up together.
Severus does not deserve Hermione love or feelings. I really hope she realizes that she's in an unhealthy relationship and it needs to end.
The first time she could not remember something should of been the tip off.
You left your story on a really sad note, and I'm against violence against woman.
I hope Severus gets caught before he rapes Hermione in your Ron fic ending.
| Lovers in London chapter 24 . 9/17/2011
loved it :)
| ecrivain anonyme chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Disappointed with the ending...there are times that i find the scenes amusing and times i felt confused with what you are trying to convey...the plot is not really that constant...i don't really know where you're getting at...there are times where your description is kind of vague...
to sum my review up i found your story at the beginning was good, but then it became rather confusing, but there's no cheesy moments so i give you that...i hope you can improve your writing next time.
| EmilyWoods chapter 12 . 8/15/2009
wow...that was unexpected...Snape and Marriage and Hermoine...
| EmilyWoods chapter 11 . 8/15/2009
| Rainaangel chapter 24 . 6/21/2009
I do so love this story & i think you captured hermione & severus so perfectly. Well done :)
| Megan Consoer chapter 24 . 7/15/2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| NewAgeGrave chapter 9 . 4/28/2008
This is good. You just need to work on your flow more. It kinda jumps, it's chapter nine and I can't find indication of whats going on. Other then the obvious...
| AliceFrey chapter 16 . 4/27/2008
Well... I just recieved a very disturbing mental image. Thanks a lot...
| AliceFrey chapter 15 . 4/27/2008
Wow, very... detailed. Nice chapter...
| AliceFrey chapter 14 . 4/27/2008
Awesome! I can only hope I'll be half as good as Snape when it comes to deceving people someday...
| Pure Girl chapter 24 . 1/18/2008
That was interesting. Do you mean that you'll write one good side where the relationship continues and another where Snape and Hermione don't get together? This has been a really good story so far.
| Amber-Jade James chapter 24 . 1/18/2008
Good chapter i that the end?
you could so write more!
if it was it was a great storie
| Heidi191976 chapter 24 . 1/18/2008
This was a great chapter. I hope that Hermione can be happy with Severus, especially after what he did to her.