Love it

I don’t know. I’ve tried to give a chance to this story but… seriously he is an ancient but all that he do is popping and mind reading. He should be OP with all of this knowledge but he just a child… if you’ve haven’t add 300 years of mental growing- that’s fine. But this is not interesting to reed. Sorry I’m dropping…

Thank you for your story.

Want book.

I am listening to this for the third time. I dont know how long it has been since I last listened to it. It's so very good that it's worth reading/listening to repeatedly. Thanks for the entertainment.

I’ve been catching the references with the names of the side characters, but Klinger? lol!

Why is a 4 Year Child used as a Soldier especially by the Ancients, as a very Advanced Civilisation it wouldn't be allowed. And if he is much older in his mind and has all the Knowledge of the Ancients why does he act like he doesn't understand that makes no sense at all. This Idea of a Guardian is nonsensical anyway why Focus on Earth when the Goa'uld enslaved many planets and commit Genocide when they can't control... It's Frustrating to say the least.

wtf is that name

I look forward to any possible continuation of your story.

His name means Peaceful Death, right?

I am loving this story.

Uggh, the NID. Some of the most annoying assholes ever.

Great story! Truly is a shame you’ve not written a sequel.

Jack always attracts the kids. Though not sure how old he would be physically at this point. Can't remember if you said how long he had really been on the new planet waiting.

Just wondering how your life is going and if your time will allow you continue this great story? Hope things are going well and that your time will allow you to start writing again.