Reviews for FEAR: Judgement
Nirvana24 chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
i loved setup and admire use of dialog and suspense as well. Also please write more.
krycalex chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Hey man! You've written a wonderful opening chapter, with a great deal of realism. I had a lot of fun reading this!

You've got to bring down the rating one notch, though; I nearly missed your fic while I was browsing. Don't worry about there being strong language content: F.E.A.R. is a Mature rated game, and the only reason someone would venture into the F.E.A.R. section is because they've played it.
Stuntman Mike chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
A few grammatical errors. I would have worded somethings differently, but other than that this part really worked. It was exciting, and intense.

How much can this guy take? This story also makes you think because we have no idea when this story takes place. Cool idea, and it's working.
Stuntman Mike chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
This is 7, bro.

Good beginning. You've set your story, now let's see where it goes.
RagingDemon2011 chapter 2 . 9/19/2007
Pretty good story you got here... I like it.

BTW, you should put the rating to M. In case you're wondering why your story hasn't shown up in F.E.A.R. category, only stories rated T or under can be viewed.