|Reviews for Harry Potter A Squib?|
| whitebuffalowmn chapter 21 . 4/29
| kurosakiami01 chapter 21 . 1/22
| Theia Pallas chapter 21 . 12/17/2014
... am i reading these too fast XDD
ahhh its nice to see dumbledore humiliated for assuming. and what you did to sirius, i loved it XDD
you love giving snarry a daughter so I've come to see :D
| delete-account-please 6143978 chapter 21 . 9/27/2014
Mighty fine story I “crying” it over
| delete-account-please 6143919 chapter 21 . 9/26/2014
Perfect story so sad to see that it came to an end
| bluekitnaru chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
alright i tried i love most of your stories but is this one of the first? because the sentences structure alone is horrid and what the hell you just jump into things why where death eaters at his house and how the hell did harry know they where death eaters what?i apologizes i like the concept but not the writing
| Heksy chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
Okay, I am just going to jump in here, as I have no idea how to put this mildly.
I have come across several of your fics.
Normally I read, assess and review a story, if the story seems interesting.
However, every time I try to read one of your stories, a lot of things annoy me.
My problems with your stories are numerous.
You have too many spelling errors to count, do not follow up on your plot lines, let situations occur out of the blue that have no bearing on the story or character, do not develop either characters nor backgrounds etcetera etcetera.
I do not care wether there is OOC-ness, but you make the characters so unbelieveable it's ridiculous.
Your fics are juvenile, ill conceived and a waste of time.
My advise to you: go do something else.
Writing is not your strong suit.
| Mickey chapter 21 . 1/11/2014
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| SakuraKoi chapter 7 . 12/4/2013
oh wow Harry
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