|Reviews for Harry Potter A Squib?|
| Momoka Slytherin chapter 21 . 8/1
oh i love your stories, please write your other ones further they are so fascinating. I really hope you ll write the other ones further. Please?
P.S. I read all your completed Harry Potter stories so i am really a big fan of yours :)
till next time
| bnjones2000 chapter 21 . 5/8
Thank you for a good story. Normally I read very long fics but I am very tired tonight and needed something a little shorter than my norm and this was perfect. This was well written the characters were a little ooc but excellent. Again I thank you.
| Sraya chapter 3 . 5/6
A big fan of your work I love that you have mainly completed works I'm usually more into a Harry/Draco or a Harry/Jasper pairing but have been enjoying the Severus and Edward stories
| whitebuffalowmn chapter 21 . 4/29
| kurosakiami01 chapter 21 . 1/22
| Theia Pallas chapter 21 . 12/17/2014
... am i reading these too fast XDD
ahhh its nice to see dumbledore humiliated for assuming. and what you did to sirius, i loved it XDD
you love giving snarry a daughter so I've come to see :D
| delete-account-please 6143978 chapter 21 . 9/27/2014
Mighty fine story I “crying” it over
| delete-account-please 6143919 chapter 21 . 9/26/2014
Perfect story so sad to see that it came to an end
| bluekitnaru chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
alright i tried i love most of your stories but is this one of the first? because the sentences structure alone is horrid and what the hell you just jump into things why where death eaters at his house and how the hell did harry know they where death eaters what?i apologizes i like the concept but not the writing
| Heksy chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
Okay, I am just going to jump in here, as I have no idea how to put this mildly.
I have come across several of your fics.
Normally I read, assess and review a story, if the story seems interesting.
However, every time I try to read one of your stories, a lot of things annoy me.
My problems with your stories are numerous.
You have too many spelling errors to count, do not follow up on your plot lines, let situations occur out of the blue that have no bearing on the story or character, do not develop either characters nor backgrounds etcetera etcetera.
I do not care wether there is OOC-ness, but you make the characters so unbelieveable it's ridiculous.
Your fics are juvenile, ill conceived and a waste of time.
My advise to you: go do something else.
Writing is not your strong suit.
| Mickey chapter 21 . 1/11/2014
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| SakuraKoi chapter 7 . 12/4/2013
oh wow Harry
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