|Reviews for Property|
| Macario Sakay chapter 34 . 8/18
| Thedarkgirl1121 chapter 34 . 8/13
Holy wow, this chapter is amazing! I was glad to see your name pop up in my notifications. You are such an amazing writer, please update soon.
| ShadowRiptide chapter 34 . 8/12
I really liked this chapter. it was so intense can't wait to see more
| Macario Sakay chapter 1 . 8/6
This story is great. I hope you keep your promise of completing this... A lot have been so hooked.
| M chapter 33 . 7/17
Noooooo I want more this story was so good ;-;
| Foxxxy the Stripper chapter 33 . 5/30
Im crying...make all this suffering end.
| Punny chapter 33 . 5/24
Clockwork, the King of Thug Life... and the one that created the 'in that moment he knew... he fucked up' I love it
| Thedarkgirl1121 chapter 33 . 5/23
Hey, you updated again! Thanks for not giving up on the story even after your troubles. We appreciate it greatly. Hopefully whatever is going on gets better for you. Well, can't wait to see the next update, as you left us in yet another cliffhanger:( haha . Great chapter!
| Guest chapter 32 . 4/2
Bless you for still working on this. I think I stumbled across it 2 years ago. I was hooked. You do a wonderful job. I never know what's going to happen next! I'm so glad you're still updating! Don't be discouraged by the gripes! I do hope you can finish it though! Thanks for your work and dedication!
| Yanna Blake chapter 32 . 3/28
Okay... Pardon my french but... Holy CATS
I am REELING.
I have been following this story for a while now and let me tell you... you are an amazing writer.
ITS ALMOST TWO AM
I AM TRYING NOT TO SCREAM IN SHOCK.
I WAS GRIPPED IN THE LAST THREE CHAPTERS.
THE WHOLE TIME
IT WAS JUST DAN SHOWING DANNY WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF HE WENT BACK?
YOU DONT UNDERSTAND I HAVE TO WRITE IN CAPS CAUSE THIS IS WHAT IM FEELING RIGHT NOW
BEAUTIFUL JUST TOTALLY MIND BLOWN
AND IM SO ANGRY
DANNY IS AN IDIOT BUT I COMPLETELY UNDERSTAND AT THE SAME TIME.
I am so amazed at how you too this 14 year old boy and COMPLETELY flipped his persona, into what Dan really should/could have been in the series.
In my opinion this should have been "The Ultimate Enemy" because this is just as nail biting as the episode was when it came out all those years ago.
You cant see it but Im applauding you from my bed right now.
Also super high five for that line about with Dan and Sam "Its used to be my tongue." *tongue flick* I had to back and read it several times it was so good. I was chortling.
Wow. Just wow!
Thank you for not giving up on this story! Thank you for all you hard work and dedication. I will truly miss this if you stopped now. Please please dont let it end here. Thank you thank you thank you!
| Pika chapter 32 . 3/16
This is such a great story. everything put into it made it so great. The diction, dialogue, plot, etc makes it so good. it is obvious you embedded so much time into this. Can't wait to read future chapters. ;)
| Thedarkgirl1121 chapter 32 . 2/23
Ooohhh! Oh I can't wait until next chapter, This is getting crazy !
| CaptainDorito chapter 32 . 2/21
WHOOAAAA What a cliffhanger. The dialogue here was so intense, I could feel every emotion. Very intense chapter I loved it! Look forward to the next one
| Iblamepie chapter 32 . 2/18
That was intense! Awesome chapter!
| Amethyste Noire chapter 32 . 2/16
It's taking all I can not to scream and cry really loudly because its almost 5 in the morning and I don't wanna wake anyone up. Like. I feel like my heart is crumpling up and I wanna throw up. ;O; I hope that's what you were going for.
I haven't reviewed much of your last couple of chapters but just know that I was super excited to read them all and my reactions were very similar to this one.
I'm not sure if it's your thing but I've been listening to a lot of music by Zack Hemsey (responsible for the Inception movie trailer music) on youtube and his song "Vengeance" on the playlist "My Way" really made that last half of this chapter like ten times more dark and dramatic and emotional for me. Because I love drama. I think that entire playlist kind of suits this story tbh. Or at least some parts. I hope you can give some of it a listen if you have the time?
Also I think you mentioned you moved to Japan a few chapters back. I hope you've been enjoying it so far! I was living in Japan when I found your story and around the time you announced that you were going to rewrite the whole story again. I think you stopped at the chapter where Sam meets Vlad for the first time. You've come so far since then. Thank you so much for continuing to write this story after so many years! I can't wait to see what happens next! 3
I am... very worried.