Reviews for Set of Wings
Guest chapter 7 . 8/28/2013
This story is awesome, please continue!
Update soon!
Midnight Kaito chapter 7 . 5/26/2008
that was great keep it up
HaloFin17 chapter 7 . 12/3/2007
No, Carl, that's definitely not good! :) Thanks for throwing me a bone there, Tori-kins, I loved it! I thought you also did a fabulous job of having Ivan discover what had happened to Michelle - the cold hands, no heartbeat. Really cool! But still Dracula does not love her, and somehow, it seems only just.

Tty soon, my long-lost twin!

musiclover209 chapter 7 . 11/30/2007
Gah! More suspense! Aw, poor Carl! And I feel bad for Gabriel! It was hard enough for him to kill Dracula ONCE, and now he's wounded, too! Ohh, gotta see what happens next! Update soon!

your friend,

Dr.Lust chapter 7 . 11/30/2007
Oh poor Ivan... his wife is a vampire now! I wonder if this story will end well for him... Can it?

And we've got VH and Dracula's encounter coming up in the next chapter? Wow! I can't wait! You gotta update soon!
LightNeverFades chapter 7 . 11/29/2007
Aw... poor Ivan..! So many misfortuntes! But he's not a bad person, so hopefully he'll get a good happy ending? ;) (Although having a undead wife does sound a bit ..scary, lol.. *weak laugh* O_o) I think the chapter title fits! :D Cause it *is* a twisted agreement! (give out a devilish cackle) XP

"And when he arrived, he would have his revenge, not only for murdering him twice, but also for the unjust deaths of the women he had once loved."

Ahh, so Dracula can feel a little huh? :) For being a man without a heart, it is an interesting concept to think about! :D He's not just getting revenge for himself; he's getting for the ones he love/d as well! :) Somehow its romantic.. somehow! lol :P

Yays to VH and Dracula meeting again! XD I know this is going to be a chaotic event! :D

Please update soon! ;)


P.S.- Lol! :D Sorry my name's complicated, lol. Even I couldn't spell it out at first, weird huh? :P I'll update Blood Diamonds as soon as I can! :D
Celtic Aurora chapter 7 . 11/29/2007
*cues loud, dramatic music* DUN DUN DUN DAH!

That was a great chapter! I feel bad for poor Ivan now...his wife's a vampire-and Dracula's bride, too! That's not good, either!

And I'm wondering what'll happen now that Gabriel knows that Dracula is alive...something tells me there's gonna be one heck of a "reunion"...

HaloFin17 chapter 6 . 11/20/2007
Ah! Not Carl! Not our favorite advice-giving friar! But I know you've got him in your good writer's hands, Tori-kins ;) Lol, Gryphon makes me smile - he's a very deadly and efficient bad guy, but he's still got a most entertaining sense of humor :)

But the big question that remains is what will Ivan do when he realizes how Dracula "helped" his wife? Hm... But Dracula is still too cool! Lol, I couldn't help but think about what Roberta said - something about "bite me!" ;) Alas, I am hooked on yet another cool bad guy. But at the same time, it's kind of a shame there aren't more of them.

Tty soon, dear!

LightNeverFades chapter 6 . 11/20/2007
AH! XD You updated! -squeals and runs around frantically- I have to read the next chapter! HAVE TO! XD This was brilliant! And very evil, as always, hehe! :P Thanks so much for revieiwing Blood Red Diamonds and I'm so happy you liked it! I'll try and update as fast as I can, as soon as I can get my muse back! -pulls at Muses's arm, who growls and snaps- Ow! o.O

Oohnoes, whats going to happen to poor Carl? And Ivan's wife! Ack! Please update soon! Looking forward to the next chappie, I know its gonna be good! ;P

Celtic Aurora chapter 6 . 11/18/2007
Uh-oh! He took Carl! Oh, well that's not good! Must warn somebody! lol I couldn't resist I had to say it!

Anyways...I just wanted to say that this is a very interesting story you have here! Keep it up!


PS: I'm also a supporter of the angel theory...he HAS to be an angel! There's so much evidence to support it!
musiclover209 chapter 6 . 11/18/2007
Oh no! Not Carl! He's the comic relief guy! Anyways, SO glad you updated! Keep up the good work, I'm in some real suspense here!

Your friend,

Dr.Lust chapter 6 . 11/18/2007
Wonderful chapter! It was worth waiting for! Poor Carl, what's gonna happen to him?

I hope you'll update soon!
musiclover209 chapter 5 . 11/11/2007
Wow, this story is really good! I like your angel references too, 'cus I also support the "Van Helsing is an angel" theory. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting!
HaloFin17 chapter 5 . 10/15/2007
Oh no, I've definitely got an bad feeling about that promise! Something wicked this way comes, for sure! And don't worry, m'dear, gory is good! Certainly preferable to any mushy romantic stuff, lol ;)

Hmm, I can't remember if you've really mentioned who the dog is, or if it's still kind of a mystery. If it is, then I don't want to say it here and give it away ;)

Very nice chapter, Tori-kins, and guess what? I updated my Troy story today! You are such an inspiration :)

Luv ya lots, tty soon!

LightNeverFades chapter 5 . 10/14/2007
I fear some more biting is going to ensue from the Vampire King.. o.O Hopefully nothing will happen? lol I liked the chap, it wasn't too short and its well-written! ;) Aww evil endings, lol -chuckles- Well, they are the fun parts of a story, the most exciting parts, so I don't see why you shouldnt write them! It'll keep me hooked even more! XD Good job with the chappie! :P

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