Reviews for A Ghostly Holiday
HalfafanD chapter 8 . 1/29/2012
Cool, awsome story. I have my own DP and Nightmare Before Christmas crossover. You should read it.
jeanette9a chapter 8 . 9/7/2011
giggle, that was funny!

X3
TheGhostWryter chapter 8 . 12/30/2009
Very interesting, i liked it very much :)

i felt it was a tad short, though. like there might have been able to be a few more chapters, but i liked how it turned out overall.
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 8 . 6/23/2009
Did Danny ever find out why they all know him? Great story.
avatar2468 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
great story! keep up the outstang work!
ArmoredSoul chapter 8 . 9/23/2007
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YAY!

The Phanster wins again!

WOHOO!

Wait a sec. The PHANSTER?

Where the heck did that gay-ass nickname come from?

*shrug*

Oh well.

Sorry for my ranting in earlier chappies, but I think the advice I gave was at least somewhat sound.
ArmoredSoul chapter 7 . 9/23/2007
RED hair, RED hair!

Sally has RED hair, not brown!

Haven't you even seen the movie?

RESEARCH YOUR TOPICS BEFORE WRITING ON THEM. Geez!
ArmoredSoul chapter 6 . 9/23/2007
Why did Jack kiss Sam? Isn't he already committed?

And why does Jack Skellington need a gun?

He's the Pumpkin King!

His scream would scare the pants offa anybody that crossed him, and they'd probably die of fright!

SO THERE!

XP
ArmoredSoul chapter 5 . 9/23/2007
F**K YOU VLAD!

SUCK WHALE DICK, YOU ASSHOLE!

URGE TO KILL. RISING.

*hefts very large and scary looking black cast iron frying pan*

I WILL DOOM YOU ALL, PATHETIC HUMANS!

Oh wait, that's Zim's line!

Woops.

I'M GONNA WHACK YOU INTO NEXT THURSDAY, PLASMIUS!

That's better.
ArmoredSoul chapter 4 . 9/23/2007
DANY!

T.T

F**K YOU OOGIE! YOU SUCK!

stupid bloody bag of creepy crawlies...

BEHOLD THE POWER OF BUG SPRAY!
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Well, I like the concept and everything, but you really need to work on your writing style. It's kinda... Haphazard, slapped together if you will. It's like you just kinda took the pieces and chucked them all in a pot to boil but you strained out the water to early, leaving the result only half cooked. I still like it, but it needs some work.
Shiva the Sarcastic chapter 8 . 9/21/2007
Cool story. I just wish there was more interaction between Danny and the other citizens of Halloween Town, as well as Jack and Sally.
Shiva the Sarcastic chapter 7 . 9/21/2007
Very good. I like Sally. She was one of the sweetest charatcers. Please update soon.
Shiva the Sarcastic chapter 6 . 9/20/2007
Great chapter. I love this story. I think we are coming to that epic climax that we're looking forward to. Please update soon.
Devianta chapter 5 . 9/20/2007
Revise!

Ah! I love torture! It's so fun to make Danny scream in pain and absolute agony! Though, I don't think he would beg for mercy. He's too stubborn.

So, update soon!
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