Screw TenTen what the hell? This story was pretty damn amazing until this point...

Wow... That escalated quickly.

XDDDD I LOVE THIS PART I LIKE HOW KIBA IS TRYING TO GET HINATA BUT FAILS
THIS THE BEST NARUHINA FANFIC EVER

nuuuuuhhhh I hate Hiashi

Amazing ... when will the baby boy come#is there

this story is really awesome.. great work.. its just so romantic and amazing... too good..

I liked it allot it was amassing ?! I guess

Can you make a fanfic about Sasuke and Sakura, picking up from when he came back to Konoha in this fanfic, like some sort of "on the other side of the story"? Pleasee... I really enjoyed your story, it was awesome, I would like to see more of your work, it looks amazing, I love it, seriously :3
Anyway, I hope you would consider my request.
And... Bye. *disappears*

naruto is a thirsty mother fucker. the way you wrote his character makes it seem like all he wants is Hinata's virgin vagina

this shit is cringe worthy! i can't believe i made it through 29 chapters. imma finish tho. BELIEVE IT! DATEBAYO!

Awwwwww I loved this fanfic so much it was awesome to read I loved every part of it I really did

I'm loving this so much

I enjoyed it. I think it was genius, nothing was rushed, and it was one of, if not, the best fanfic I had ever read. Please keep writing. I would love to read a sequel where Kenji is a bit more grown up and Naruto continues his job and spends time with his family. I won't criticize you about any grammar mistakes. There were some, but I don't give a crap. That was a wonderful fanfiction and was the first book-like thing I ever read all the way through. Funny, awesome, and just flat-out great! Please keep doing what you do best.

I like the kenshin and final fantasy 7 references haha

so far soo gooood