Man you should message me your chapters and I'll help you because I want u to continue and I'd be glad to help you...ur an amazing author and I want you to make more pleassssse.

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OMG! absolutely 100% keep writing these naruto fanfics ... I stayed up till 3 in the morning on the edge of my seat reading this story ... it is positively the best thing I have ever read ...do not stop writing these stories ... especially about naruto and hinata, there perfect together

This is the most amazing fanfic ive ever read, but you could have named this chapter somthing less scary

Why is jaruto the one seemingly always the perveted one

People come on there should be drama in this thing...sakura should be inferiared with jealousy and start you know might avoid them or tell naruto she loves her or plots to something to give it a little drama

They should have named their son minato after naruto's father

I think it was pretty good not the worst or best but it kept me on edge and gave something to read for a while.

Nice story bro/sis, covering the basic's that's but its a good story of how Hinata and Naruto finally became a couple

ah ha ha ha i see what you did there lol :D

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As you promised, it was very fluffy

Overall, I thought the whole story was amazing. Im not the type of person who enjoys to read/watch love stories, but this one I really enjoyed. Im going to keep this short and sweet. I wish that nearly all fanfics could come close to this one. But, the only thing I didn't like is that you used the word, "love", too much. Other than that, I really enjoyed this one.

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So far the best fanfic I have ever read... Please continue!

i think temari's character is a little too much