Reviews for Naruto and Hinata Lavender Eyed love
naruto lover chapter 53 . 7/29/2013
dude continue this story its dead on awesome and im sure lots of people agree with me continue make a story about their family just continue please
Lightning267zap chapter 53 . 7/25/2013
So that's it you done? You were the only story I truly loved to read, I couldn't stop reading once I got started, I was hoping to see an updated Naruto version of this story. But it sadly seems that you are finished, the last time you updated was two years ago, so I don't think you will even read this.. But just know even if I'm the only fan left, you shouldn't ever doubt yourself, as an on-off writer I know how it feels to write something then not want to write anymore, then after a week you feel like writing again. But I say, you did an awesome job, and you shouldn't stop writing these, or at least keep writing something.. I want to read more damn it XP
Hinatawolf chapter 53 . 7/12/2013
This is a great story! Great job!
RebelKira chapter 53 . 7/8/2013
Would lobe to see more :)
RebelKira chapter 52 . 7/8/2013
Its sad to hear that you weren't going to continue making stories this was actually well written in my opinion you have a real talent for this this was the first naruhina story i have read and i highly doubt I'll find anything better
Guest chapter 7 . 6/30/2013
It's getting a bit ridiculously sappy. Coming from someone who's been in love, I definitely didn't say it so may times in one day that it made me nauseous.
Non chapter 53 . 6/28/2013
If u some how reading this do more fucking live naruto and hinata
Jzc chapter 53 . 6/23/2013
Pretty good story make more
cristian chapter 52 . 6/23/2013
I would love to thank u for these story they r the best I read so far congrats chuck Norris killed a hole army whith 1 bullet then he put that bullet in a gun
TreyFlo chapter 52 . 6/22/2013
I thought this was the best story in the world... i am amazed that you thought it was bad! i read it for hours straight and i am upset that it is over but i think you should do a follow up on kenji growing up.. You are an amazing writer in my opinion in all seriousness and i would love to read a legitament book that wasn't a fanfic from you.. honestly, ouve done an excellent job.. so thank you for the wonderful experience of getting to read this amazing story.. Bye :3.. hopefully naruto will confess to Hinato in the actual show :)
-If its your dream, dont ever give it up! I was glued to my computer for sometimes hours straight! couldnt get enough! ok bye again :D
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
JNT45567 chapter 53 . 6/14/2013
I just read all those chapters in less than 1 day. You're idea for a beta reader will only work if 1. You actually decide to do it, 2. you get at least 5 ppl to be editors/betareaders to help you build the story. (I say this because if you were to receive replies from the 5 ppl you could focus your work around their criticism, and not be like well they want this and they want this and be completely torn and unable to move forward, 3. they need to be able to help spell check you're work and don't worry about posting anything on a schedule that just burdens yourself more i would do it a chapter a week, also try describing the characters and their expressions more you got through this story simply bc it's fan fiction and everyone knows what these characters look like and how they talk and everything but you're not very descriptive, also try rereading your own work even if it's only a skim you can tell which ones you re read and which you didn't there are more typos by far, okay im done giving you shit now i just wanted to let you know that you made Naruto and Hinata fanfic absolutely incredible for me and I thank you for a truly amazing story even if I am what like 2-6 years too late? yea ohh well just keep writing you have an amazing talent.
happy chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
i really like you story plus i'm thankful theirs not alot of bad words i really dislike them.
Michael chapter 52 . 6/9/2013
Im a big naruto fan and I recently started to re read the manga tho I was disappointed it didnt have the next chaper yet I wanted more naruto so I came to fan fiction and stumbled on your work. (Im a fan of NaruHina obviously) at first I thought it was a waste of time for me that I should have just read a different manga, but as the story progressed it became better though towards the end I did see there were 52 chapters and I was in chapter 51 already. I started to become sad because the story was over and I wanted more of it :)

Good job ;)
Guest chapter 43 . 6/6/2013
they are so sweet together
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