| Reviews for Naruto and Hinata Lavender Eyed love |
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   ranbo neal chapter 25 . 4/14/2012 These are some well written chapters of Naruto and Hinata relationship stuff...I love what you do with these characters. I am having fun reading about the things you have them doing as they get more involved with each other. I wonder what Hinata will do about fighting Hanabi. |
| ranbo neal chapter 17 . 4/14/2012 Great story so far. You said in your preview that the beginning of the story wasn't as good as the later chapters. I love the chapters so far so...we'll see ...I don't see how the later ones could get any better. Super writing. |
| ranbo neal chapter 23 . 4/14/2012 I like how the story is taking step by step, showing how Naruto and Hinata are overcoming problems and things that stand between them. They are now going to pass Hiashi's test. Great job! |
| ranbo neal chapter 20 . 4/14/2012 These are wonderful sweet chapters. Great romantic writing. |
| ranbo neal chapter 14 . 4/14/2012 Another superb chapter. I can see nothing wrong grammar wise and your writing skill is fine. I loved the fact that Naruto thought that Hinata was kidnapped and then finds her...only to have a hateful Hiashi show up...good cliffhanger. |
| ranbo neal chapter 12 . 4/14/2012 You have a good touch with Hinata...she didn't crumble to the demands of her 'father'...I think that you show how she would really react if her love for Naruto was challenged. She has loved Naruto since the first anime and the first mangas. I think she would be tough enough to stand up to anyone the way she stood up to Neji. |
| ranbo neal chapter 11 . 4/14/2012 I am enjoying the way that Naruto and Hinata decide to take action and then jump right in...like getting Tsunade's help to tell Hiashi. Nice touch with the characters. |
| ranbo neal chapter 10 . 4/14/2012 Things are sure heating up fast:) Very fun chapters to read. |
| ranbo neal chapter 7 . 4/14/2012 Great writing...you do a fine job of going from one scene to another and from one character to another. Smooth writing and easy to read. Cool! |
| ranbo neal chapter 6 . 4/14/2012 Naruto doesn't mess around in this story! He got right to what he wanted and settled it with Hinata right away. They are already boy/girlfriend. Super...fast paced story so far. |
| ranbo neal chapter 5 . 4/14/2012 Cooool chapter...What a great story! |
| ranbo neal chapter 4 . 4/14/2012 Loved the chapter! I'm glad to see they aren't continually interupted or Hinata isn't afraid to be around Naruto...great story so far. |
| ranbo neal chapter 3 . 4/14/2012 This is a fun-to-read...well written story. Great job. |
| ranbo neal chapter 2 . 4/14/2012 I like the way you got Hinata and Naruto together...and they quickly talked and related to each other...great writing. Love the story so far. |
| ranbo neal chapter 1 . 4/13/2012 Cool story beginning! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Naruto and Hinata. |