|Reviews for Black Sheep|
| Eerie Iri chapter 3 . 10/28/2010
Second chapter: Don't remember reviewing even though it says I did, so great job on it!
Is it bad that this chapter made me think that Blackout is trying to get under Starscream's plating because he wants our dear Air Commander?
| Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
| Sunstreaker's Squishy chapter 3 . 3/16/2008
-hugs Starscrem- ( he needs a psychatrist)
" What! I am the Starscream. Hear me roar!"
Did he say what I think he said?- hand grenade in the spark-
" That's better."-walks away from a twitching Starscream.
| Ace of Dreams chapter 2 . 3/14/2008
Great chapter. This is a very cool, dark take on Blackout, and you portrayed Ratchet's bitter sadness about the betrayal really well. I feel so sorry for him, and Blackout too, strangely enough.
| Eerie Iri chapter 2 . 3/14/2008
This story is very good. However, I feel so SORRY for poor Ratchet!
| The Feesh chapter 2 . 3/14/2008
| Bluebird Soaring chapter 2 . 3/14/2008
And just when I thought I had seen all of the good Ratchet stories, you write this one. Gah, I don't have words for how chilling and bitter this one feels...poor Ratchet! And that has to be the worst sort of betrayal - his creation which was trained to help people ends up a weapon to hurt them. And if the others know Ratchet created him, they must make comments right out of his earshot. But his self-condemnation can't be worse than those whispered comments. Very well done!
| Kittona chapter 2 . 3/14/2008
very interesting (in a good way) poor Ratchet...
I enjoyed reading
| SyntheticEuph0ria chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
That. . . was utterly horrifying. But in a good way, I swear! XD
I love little snippets of delving into a character's head. :3
| Violetlight chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
It's rare to see such short flashback-type oneshots so well written. I would love to see an expanded version of this story, perhaps illustrating one of Megatron's "lessons". Good job!
| BlackBolt chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
this is so way megatron :/... poor blackout (in a way). :/
can't wait for the next chapter :) please update soon ?
*hugs*, bye, Blackie ..
| Retired 5.01.2012 chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
Oi, that's kinda dark.
I likes it.
You are seriously talented.