|Reviews for A Maximum Ride fic|
| disneydork chapter 2 . 9/29/2007
like the story
chapters are realy short though :(
can you separate that giant paragraph into little ones next time?
sorry, it's just realy hard to read.
| nicmirusaki chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
well i updated it and it's now paragraphed and yes this is fanfiction thanks for the review btw
| The Probable Future chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
... Try a different approach. Don't use abbriviations and try to paragraph your writing. Is this your first fanfiction? If it is, please don't think of this as a flame, but constructive critism.