Reviews for Harry Potter: Unchampion
rb2312 chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
Great little story.

I read others where harry only does the bare minimum in order to satisfy the contract and this is one of the better ones.

looking forward to seeing how harry's summer goes and what happens when the quartet start the new school.
guessing that fudge will not be going after harry as he was not present when voldy was mentioned

really hope they find a way to clear sirius. Maybe a french court will clear him and offer him protection from the british ministry.

wonder how many students may follow harry to france.
SeverlyLate chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
It would be a decent oneshot if one removes all the lame fluff with Ginny.
N Flamel chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Kevin, of all the alternatives available that Dumbledore ignored in canon, your solution is perhaps the easiest, has the most common sense, and ultimately is the funniest way to go. Let's face it, Dumbledore left Harry hanging when his name came out of the Goblet. Your story creatively shows how inept Dumbledore actually is in most situations that occurred during the series.

Most of all, I liked the personality change that Harry experienced when he finally had had enough to say, 'screw it.' Great job in showing that transformation, showing how well Ginny could adjust to this rogue Harry, and finally showing how often DD failed Harry. Plus, the story was flat out funny. Thanks for another great read. As a side comment, I went back to SIYE to see what I had written many years ago (as The Seeker) and was shocked to not find anything, so please accept this review in its place, even though it's about seven years late! - N Flamel
sea-kingdom chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
this is amazing
i love this so much!
Anaelyssa chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Good story.

At least Barty was smart enough to realize that there was no way Harry would get to the cup.
city bookworm chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
I love a more independant Harry. In your story he is not going to be used or pushed around by anyone even Dumbledore. Plus it is cute with Harry and Ginny. I like the idea that they'd go to a different school other than Hogwarts. With all the things that happened to them, I am only surprised that no one thought about that. You'd think that someones parents would've pulled their kids out or at least complained some. To bad that the story ended would have been interestind to see what you'd come up with next.
Triforce Guardian chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I agree with you. I really think this could be developed into something more. With Voldemort still in his homunculus/wraith form and unable to cause havoc like in the canon, the wizarding world would be more peaceful overall and Harry would be able to focus on his training and education. I can imagine Dumbledore raising major issues, but since he's not technically Harry's guardian, he cannot have any say. Outside of the old man's influences, Harry would then be able to find out everything about himself, including the true "power-he-knows-not" rather than that "love-is-the-greatest-power" crap.
Nova chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Looking forward to it if it comes out, pt 2 I mean.

Loved this. ;p
Hoodie Hugger chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
This was a great, unique idea for a story and I've never seen anything quite like it. I do wish that you had elaborated more on many of the scenes and that there were fewer egregious OOC moments (mostly with Snape, Dumbledore, and Harry's public announcements).
Finwitch1 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Lovely story. Particularly how Cedric stayed alive, and all just because Harry made a different choice about the stupid tournament. And capturing the Barty Crouch Jr. was great, too. Harry's found strength in weakness. i love it. And Snape's probation...
Well, this also has the effect that Harry won't be subject to Dementor attack as the Ministry has no reason to, nor is he at the Dursleys... Sirius' freedom is the only thing missing- well, he never got a trial, so maybe the French ministry will grant him sanctuary - especially if he undergoes a trial with them.
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Putting this on 'Alert' in case you do continue it...
Nytefyre chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
It's a great segment, with potential for more, but tied up well enough to be satisfying as is.

Thanks for posting.
Kmon13 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
I really like how this story went and how he prevented the rebirth of Voldermort...

And his choice to leave Hogwarts too...

Hope both Fudge and Dumbles are happy...
bkasavan chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Nice story :) I am eager to see what will continue :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
That was soooooo funny
Accio golden egg
Accio Ron
Accio tri wizard cup
Funny he just like didn't try at all funny
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