Reviews for Harry Potter: Unchampion
city bookworm chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
I love a more independant Harry. In your story he is not going to be used or pushed around by anyone even Dumbledore. Plus it is cute with Harry and Ginny. I like the idea that they'd go to a different school other than Hogwarts. With all the things that happened to them, I am only surprised that no one thought about that. You'd think that someones parents would've pulled their kids out or at least complained some. To bad that the story ended would have been interestind to see what you'd come up with next.
Triforce Guardian chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I agree with you. I really think this could be developed into something more. With Voldemort still in his homunculus/wraith form and unable to cause havoc like in the canon, the wizarding world would be more peaceful overall and Harry would be able to focus on his training and education. I can imagine Dumbledore raising major issues, but since he's not technically Harry's guardian, he cannot have any say. Outside of the old man's influences, Harry would then be able to find out everything about himself, including the true "power-he-knows-not" rather than that "love-is-the-greatest-power" crap.
Nova chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Looking forward to it if it comes out, pt 2 I mean.

Loved this. ;p
Hoodie Hugger chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
This was a great, unique idea for a story and I've never seen anything quite like it. I do wish that you had elaborated more on many of the scenes and that there were fewer egregious OOC moments (mostly with Snape, Dumbledore, and Harry's public announcements).
Finwitch1 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Lovely story. Particularly how Cedric stayed alive, and all just because Harry made a different choice about the stupid tournament. And capturing the Barty Crouch Jr. was great, too. Harry's found strength in weakness. i love it. And Snape's probation...
Well, this also has the effect that Harry won't be subject to Dementor attack as the Ministry has no reason to, nor is he at the Dursleys... Sirius' freedom is the only thing missing- well, he never got a trial, so maybe the French ministry will grant him sanctuary - especially if he undergoes a trial with them.
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Putting this on 'Alert' in case you do continue it...
Nytefyre chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
It's a great segment, with potential for more, but tied up well enough to be satisfying as is.

Thanks for posting.
Kmon13 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
I really like how this story went and how he prevented the rebirth of Voldermort...

And his choice to leave Hogwarts too...

Hope both Fudge and Dumbles are happy...
bkasavan chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Nice story :) I am eager to see what will continue :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
That was soooooo funny
Accio golden egg
Accio Ron
Accio tri wizard cup
Funny he just like didn't try at all funny
Chrystella99 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
THIS IS SUCH A GOOD FANFIC! Harry and Ginny! I rly loved how Harry is rebellious. It reminds me...of me:D great job and seriously, i cant get over how much i love this.
Paladin Nox chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
excellent read. thanks for sharing
d1x1lady chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Loved it! Clever story.
Winged Seer Wolf chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
i wish you could have made this fic a full story as it leaves the ending open.
Mommy3 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Well, I was just going through all my favorite stories and found that I haven't reviewed this story, which is wierd because I love it and have read and reread it so many times. I love how Harry is like, fight a dragon, yeah, I don't think so. And, jump into a frozen lake in February, you've got to be kidding, right? It's such a teenage reaction to something that they don't want to do, I can totally see it happening. Also, I love that you had Harry look into another option for potions and history. I like the idea of him thinking, hey, I don't like the way I'm being treated, let's see if I can change that. Thank you for writing, you are one of my favorite fanfic authors and I just wanted you to know that I appreciate the work you put into your stories. :)
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