wow thats pretty good update soon.

hey awsome story please wright more i love yoruichi and ichigo together there really adorable together

Aw! I think that the story that you've put up is pretty cute. And rather romantic if I do say so myself. Especially since it's featuring both Ichigo and Yoruichi. Now on with the review on what you got so far.

From what I could see, it seems that you've got both of them set up in some during a regular raining day. Of course, in Ichigo's case, it's always a sad day to look at. It was rather odd of Yoruichi to just appear in the real world just to visit Ichigo. But the way that you've describe on how she's feeling towards the orange haired Shinigami. It's rather romantic to be honest. But it's rather nice of Ichigo to be taking care of her like an injured child. But what really got to me is the fact that those hollows were after her to begin with. Not to mention the fact that she keeps having nightmares about Ichigo dying in her arms. Well, I'm sure that future chapters would reveal the answers to questions like that.

Now, seriousness aside, I think that it was rather funny for when Yoruichi caught Ichigo with, quite literally, with his pants down when she's on her two feet. Especially for when the cat-eyed lady was trying to get a little frisky with the teenaged virgin(though this could not be confirmed nor denied). It's a pretty funny moment. I wonder what would happen if Ichigo's dad ever found out? Probably the usual lecture about his son's manliness along with a kick to the face by his own son.

Well, that's all that I have to say for this chapter. Hope that you could keep up the good work. Later!

Maurice A. Nigma

You know, if you combined this chapter with the last one it would feel more like a real chapter. As it stands it seems more like a half or quarter of a chapter to me, both in length and the way they're constructed. They're a good half or quarter chapters but that doesn't change what they are. You see what I'm saying?

Please continue!Your stories are great!

This is a great story. I just wish the chapters were longer...

update soon!

This is a really good story. I can't wait for the other chapters.

Great story so far! I like the dynamic you have going on between thesse two rigth now. I can't find much wrong anywhere so here's two thumbs up! *two thumbs up* Update soon!

Nice start please continue with the story!