|Reviews for In The Corner of Your Eye|
| Quasipsychotic chapter 25 . 5/18
I'm not gonna lie. The ending was both awesome and not awesome at the same time. Awesome cause smut and stuff. Not awesome because there wasn't much relationship build up to get to that level. Also not awesome since that was just so abrupt and the smut ruined the pacing.
Anyway, ending aside, I loved reading this and I think that this is a brilliant crossover and play on the MoD theme.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/28/2015
Now that's I've read to the end of the manga, it's quite fun to go back to such fics with alternative histories :)
| jupimako chapter 25 . 2/28/2015
I enjoyed your story! Thank you.
| jupimako chapter 1 . 2/28/2015
What an interesting premise. I can't wait to read what happens! Excuse me while I go do that now...
| Riddle Wraith chapter 25 . 12/9/2014
I liked this. :) Although Shisui was a little shit. Ah well, he got possessed by his own ancestor so I'm just gonna laugh at him and call that one good. Because seriously? Fuck that guy. Anyway, awesome story. Kudos and whatnot to you.
| bonbon2007 chapter 8 . 11/8/2014
hey if you ever do plot four let me know lol it sounds interesting
| RakellaXloveXMusic chapter 25 . 5/15/2014
This was a great story ! :) tough imagine Deidra being descended from Mad Eye xP Loved it and cant wait to read your other works xD
| Kimayce chapter 25 . 5/4/2014
Brilliant! I so do love reading finished stories. Brilliant plots! Ah, and here I was wishing for a little bit of Madara/Harry. Thanks for sharing and completing this story. I enjoyed it well.
| Trance20666 chapter 25 . 3/29/2014
i love this idea
would Harry becoming Mortal affect his abilities any?
make if less powerful?
i'm just wondering why you didn't make Tengu a snake demon
and not a bird?
though being a serpent would be kinda obvious
i think i had other questions
but i forgot them
| Trance20666 chapter 2 . 3/29/2014
if another person gathers all three,
would Harry loose his Immortality?
or would that person have to defeat him first?
| Trance20666 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
the start is very interesting
so the Villages come after the Wizarding World?
Harry fought and won against The Dark Lord?
would Orochimaru go after Harry to gain Immortality?
can't wait to see more.
| He-who-runs-into-walls chapter 15 . 1/14/2014
Don't worry Maito Guy syndrome isn't a permanent affliction
| MeinNameIstHase chapter 25 . 12/3/2013
A god among men is nothing among gods.
| saashi samy chapter 25 . 8/19/2013
i like the story
| saashi samy chapter 1 . 8/18/2013