Reviews for Existence
tenshiakuma14 chapter 25 . 8/26
So many times I wished were actually like these fanfictions. Sigh. Great job man all we need now is an update
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 16 . 6/3
What the hell! Tayuya on Konoha? What is The plan?
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 15 . 6/3
I enjoy so much the battle scenes.. and m glad to see you keep the original plot.. Shikamaru is a genius and he was a jerk too! Hahaha..
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 10 . 6/1
Naro is an not much original name.. but i like the story at least..
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 3 . 5/4
Temari is so good person.. Kishimoto why you make Naruto for Hinata? He was perfect to Temari..
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 2 . 5/4
Very interesting.. oh how original you are naruto, Naro Uzaki is the most stupid name ever!
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 1 . 5/3
Look good.. but just because es a NaruTema.. if this turn into NaruSaku im ending my way here!
the guardian of yu yevon chapter 16 . 3/4
to the hack writers who posed as fan of Naruto important here so others will know that you're not actual fans of the show but very bad right is tempting to get a job this thing is no one because if you were a fan you would know that there's no military dialogue in it that's why I can't get an answer from any of you you're not actual friends at the show you see one at you episodes and you take a small reference any good fanfic can do that a true fan no it's not go from hot to the very last episode I don't know which is fanfic cuz it contradicts the pilot episode Enter. Naruto uzumaki. that's how you know they're not actual fans just trust me on this one so I asked that everyone studied in any Naruto fanfiction as a way to protest these idiots attempt to pose actual fans and stuff of you and the stories we want to see what truth is Go read Star Wars fanfiction any. category
shadow knight chapter 9 . 3/4
why don't you just make Sakura realize she likes girls
shadow knight chapter 7 . 3/4
just so you know the five hidden Villages not Nations and The Villages of a fur to the hidden Leaf Village there is no international incident this is not the world of global presidential stuff so please stop making them something it's not the be
Ahern20 chapter 24 . 2/1
Thanks for such a great fic. I hope you will one day decide to continue. Either way, thanks :)
Derpatron9000 chapter 8 . 1/9
Good fic but Sasuke and Sakura not knowing who Minato was seemed very stupid, his head is literally on the mountain in Konoha.
Guest chapter 23 . 1/5
Why did you kill Choji? :(
YeagerMeister31 chapter 25 . 12/1/2016
well this was another cool chapter the Konoha 11 know about Naruto's Burden as well as Gaara's would have liked a bit for fluff from NaruTema but that's OK. got to see Karin. And got my suspicions about Itachi correct can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 24 . 11/30/2016
well this was a very interesting chapter Sasgay got away should be dead mind u can't wait for more there should have been a NaruTema lemon before the trip though lol. i wonder if anything will happen with Sakura and Naruto
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