|Reviews for Escaping Sol|
| tnuccio chapter 24 . 11/9/2008
wow...two chapters! I'm doing the happy dance!
I loved it. Alice story was so painful...terrible...and good...wow
| christinemarie13 chapter 24 . 11/9/2008
I've never seen Alice's painful story told before other than the basics. Poor, poor Alice.
And I'm so glad that Bella was able to fight through the darkness.
I can't wait to see what transpires next.
| asimpledesign chapter 24 . 11/9/2008
please please please update soon this is the best story ever! you're brillant writer keep it up! :)
| Bella1111 chapter 24 . 11/9/2008
I am so sorry for your loss. We all appreciate that you continue to update your stories despite the reality of the real world.
Love your writing style - very in depth and interesting. Alice's story made me cry.
| IAmTheBattleMaiden chapter 24 . 11/9/2008
Hahaha. Nice ending! _ I wonder how they'll defeat Andrew... I mean, you know, REALLY defeat him. Or maybe they won't be able to... Whatever. I look forward to finding out. _
| latuacantante4him chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
Glad she is okay. Hope they find and destroy the arm.
| Transfiguration chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
hm...good update-very tricky and crazy but well written and well worth it-im ready to get this stupid war over with!
| TwilightLover7 chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
I can sum up the last two chapters by saying...well i can't really sum them up! The English language doesn't even have the right words able to fully describe the pure awsomeness of this story! This is better than BD by a long shot and i luv it with all my heart. It would be great if you could read one of my stories, and review, well that would make my day! my year! I'm one of your biggest fans! Well have a great day!
-luv Tia- _p.s. Jacob, victoria and laurent r coming to the Mall of America on the 14th! Hot topic! for the movie... o i can't wait! spread the word! ;)
| Sheeijan chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
OK the thing with Alice was just brutal to read. I felt so badly for her. It really was a blessing in disguise that she didn't remember her human life, huh?
Thanks so much for the update!
| lemon-of-the-tent chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
Oh my GOD! I'm so tragically happy after that! I was terrified that you were goign to have some really crap ending where they all become human and then live happily ever after as God intended (aka. Human). In fact, I was really worried that SMeyer, when she finished the Twilwight series, would decide not to make Bella a vampire. I mean, let's face it, it's not the best sort of message to give out to young people. That gambling your mortality to become fast and strong and beautiful is right and makes you happy in the end. I mean, that wasn't meant to be the message, but I could see some really dumb people reading into it the wrong way. Then again, did BD have any age appropriate advice? The last time I checked, no one was too happy about teenage preganancy rates, and it's probably not wise to entertain hosts of people who would like to eat your friends. It basically advertised murderers. (In truth, for me, though: the traditional vampires were my favourite characters in the book - especally the Irish and Egyptian covens... and Garret, my homie. Though the Cullens were still my all-time favourites, obviously. So I basically don't agree with any of my points...)
Anyway, my ORIGINAL point was, that I was scared that they would all end up human, because technically, being human is RIGHT. I don't actually believe that, but it could have been. :) In someone elses eyes.
I had loads of favourite lines, but there are actually too many, so i won't bother with naming them. Just know that the dialogue was fantastic, as always. :) I was actually sobbing during Alice's past bit, and couldn't believe that it would happen like that. It was brilliantly done, though. I always wanted to hear more about Alice, and was a tad disappointed when we didn't in the actual books. I also wanted to be told Esme's properly, and find out where Tanya and Kate were from. I am a tad curious when it comes to personal histories. Well, vampire ones. I will be the first to start snoring (comedically) when a teacher at school begins talking about their beginnings (humble, or otherwise). When a vampire starts reminiscing, though, I'm all ears. Maybe, if my teachers began to tell their tales as vamprie, I would suddenly be more attentive. :D I doubt that will happen, though, so we'll never find out.
I'm really looking forwards to the end of the story. I mean, we still have all that Volturi stuff to sort out... I doubt Aro will be a very happy bunny when he finds out that he can't keep Bella. Shame, shame. I don't hate the Volturi, I just don't like them when they're being dicks. They can be simply charming, and excellent dinner party hosts... Haha I'm getting carried away.
Please upload soon! I really appreciate that you've taken the time to post more. I really love this story. I even took the time to write this lovely long rambling reveiw, even after praticing guitar for ages (my fingers are screaming in protest). THAT is true patheticness. I need to go and soak my fingers... :(
| lemon-of-the-tent chapter 23 . 11/8/2008
I'm so sorry for your loss, and really appreciate the fact that you bothered updating in the end anyway. Wow. I'm nowhere near as strong as you.
I really loved this chapter! One of my favourites so far, I think. And that's including the shower-wedding. :)
I really wantto leave you a smashingly long reveiw, but I'll justr wait until the next chapter after this. I can't actrualy wait to read on... :)
| OliviaJane chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
Another highly emotionally charged chapter. I love how you ended it with a bit of humorous sarcasm. :)
| OliviaJane chapter 23 . 11/8/2008
I swear this has got to be the most emotionally packed ff ever. It pulls at you from all sides.
Well, I'm off to read the next chapter. :)
| Highlands chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
255: Ahh. If I were a publisher I would tell you and Cullenista to send your storey to me so I could publish it . . .
I love that last line of humour, too. Unexpected, yet so very welcome. Very nice.
| ol2bob chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
yay! an end to that evil cliffhanger.
and yes I'm glad you did keep Edward's part from the previous.. I think Bella needed to see that and I needed to see her see that... haha