|Reviews for Their Deadly Comminations|
| Paradise2000 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
That was fantastic! This is a really sweet story, short but good. The dialogue is excellent. Don's such a sweet guy. And Raph drinking beer when he's injured - LOL! Raph is so stubborn - even when he's ill!
| GirlforGod99 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
| TheThirdAetas chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Donnie is always the voice of reason. Just because he is the voice of reason.
I really love how this played out, it really showed the dynamic between all the brothers and the roles they play in the family.
Thank you for posting this story, it was well-done and well-played.
| Just Black Sugar chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Awwww! Leo's very funny! Punish himself... XD Just Leonardo Hamato could do a thing like that XDDD
Donnie was fantastic, nice work, Don! And Mikey...you must pay more attention!
You did a great work!
| Megan McAlistair chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
why are all of your stories so cute?
schmoop is such a perfect word for it
I loved this one
how Leo punishes himself with horrible katas
| halfcent chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
This was such a touching story, one of my favorites.
| Saru Wolfe chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Story loved and adored. They were in character and very much as described in the summary. It sounds like something that would actually happen. Your writing is wonderful (Huzzah for grammar!). I love it!
| Katanagirl16 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
I love feedback too! If only more ppl would REVIEW when they READ *sob*
| SubtleBubbles chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
This was great! Another thing I love from your fics is how you write the interactions between everbody, you can see it as if it was happening right in front of you. Great job on this one!
| Mainframe chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
I finally found the time to read some of the ‘mass’ TMNT fiction I downloaded over the weekend and came across your work. Let me just say, straight up, it’s a pleasure. I love it when fan authors get the guy’s in character, no sacrificing character to further plot.
This one of yours stood out immediately as I started to read, the backdrop to this little family drama perfectly defined and I knew I was going to enjoy this.
The interaction between the two brothers was wonderful, and Don’s opening icebreaker perfect.
“See? You do know how to be a ninja.” 3
The perceived age difference was done nicely, the way the other three were keeping an eye on Mikey, and that Raph would be the one to get hurt…; Guy cant catch a break. But then again he did get his mitts on a case of beer courtesy of Casey so I’m sure he’s happily drinking his silver lining.
Their roles and interactions are quite clearly defined and I love the fact that Don’s the one to talk reason to Mike, and let him know that Leo’s being a masochist over the way he spoke to Mikey (was grinning from ear-to-ear when I read the kata business)…and probably the fright he got himself.
Mikey let out a watery sounding giggle. “He hates 'Phoenix'.” XD
A-h. Mikey’s so cute. This is a brilliant fic and I loved every minute of it!
I would have really been interested to read the flip side of this encounter from Leo’s viewpoint. That would be interesting as a companion to this (Just a thought ;)
| Michael J Angelo chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
brotherly fluff between Mikey and Donnie... How cute! -
| Rose of Hope chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
love it! love it! love it! I love it when people get the correct Don. thx! and love it! keep up the great work!
| Legendary Chimera chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Awe, this is one of my favorites! Not only do you use my fav turtle universe, but that heart-to-heart was wonderfully written. Oh man, Raph on med and booze. Are they sure they want to go home?
| banana.andthena - 2.0 chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Whe! Yay for Angry-then-guilty!Leo
| Courk chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Aww, I like this one. Left me all warm and fuzzy. :-)