|Reviews for Blood and Chocolate|
| Nilahxapiel chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
I really, really like this. Raito's already staring to like L? Thats great! And actually, no out of character, because he doesn't remember anything. I love this scenario, it's totally underused; 'Everyone knows Light is Kira but Raito!' LOL. He's also quite adorable when he's clueless.
Oh, and...this'll be L-seme, right? I really hope so, and I can already sort of tell that's where it's heading. But sometimes the author misleads..._~ L's very in character too. It's intersting that he was so against thinking about a boy that way. Most people make him apathetic in regards to sexual orientation. This is a new look on it, I think. :)
Also, just a teensy correction, when you were talking from Light's POV, at one point, Light called Ryuuzaki 'L' in his mind, and he doesn't know that's L's name, right? Just warning you. I don't really care. Just thought you might want to know.
I really hope you continue this! It's really well written and intersting, and I'll review! So please continue!
| The Apple's Pie chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
This is cool! I cant help but wonder what exactly happened to Raito-kun, but im sure thats going to be gone over in future chapters. In otherwords; Please contiue it! *x*
| Violet Velvetine chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
My eyes were glued to the screen after I started to read this. The set up you have is wonderful and captures my full attention. You're doing great, I look forward to where this is going.
| Aqua chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
I hope you continue with it and I am anciously waiting for updates.
| whitelilly chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Continue! Aww i love it!
| Serria chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Oh, I like this a lot! It's written in a way that keeps it interesting. I like how hot-tempered Light is at being so vulnerable around a stranger. XD Tsk, tsk, Light-kun, you ought to be more grateful! And L is his quirky, sweet-yet-sour self. Very nice, definitely continue this!
| Dipilidopa chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
this intresting, but light isnt very subtle here, which is a little OOC, and it seemed kind of weird to me that he didnt even think about going from there, but he is hurt so...
hope you will update soon
| Not Your Exception chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
YES. It's worth continuing.
There's a fair bit of spelling errors and that in there, but I don't care - the awesome plot makes up for it one hundred and ten percent. Not like I've got a good idea what the plot IS, though...
And that's why you should continue!