Reviews for Until Her Heart Stops
VJM130899 chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
it made me cry bad
thtz so sweeeeeeeeeeet
I wish I had a friend like him
nd I wud never hurt him like bella did.

wat was Edward supposed to ask bella though?

luv ya
Alexa Skywalker chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Painfully beautiful!
jberri79 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Beautifully written.
Sinister Whispers chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Anitoon3 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
This is sad! :(

Good job on this! :)

~ Anitoon3
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
LiLAnnie123 chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Beautifully written!

charmed1k chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Fantastically written.

I feel like a masochist for reading it over a second heart literally hurts!
Gone Gone Very Gone chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Beautifully written. i'm not a jacob fan but i do enjoy seeing into his mind.
Princess Geta chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Wow that was really beautiful. I've been trying to read some Twilight fanfiction but I have not found one that keep everyone in character. This is about the 5th one I've read today and the only one I really liked.

Great job.

twilightlover333 chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
That was so sad, I have tears in my eyes. Poor Jake, you can't help loving him in this story.
Peace Like a River chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
This was incredibly haunting. Well done.

Now please excuse me while I melt into a puddle of tears, lol.
daphne 13 chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Really powerfull. Loved it!
taylorgoesrawr chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
OMG, that was so sad! I could really feel Jacob's pain through this, and even though I am a proud supporter of Team Edward, it sort of made me rethink my decision for a moment there.

It was amazing! (:
rubiesandrain chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
OMC! I'm a Jacob-Hater, but this made me cry! AWESOME!
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