Reviews for My Brother and His Girlfriend
Cknsw chapter 1 . 3/31
Tina Currier chapter 1 . 3/12/2021
So much love, caring and understanding in such a short span of words. Very Jasper!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2019
Awwwwwwwww. So sweet. Is the little girl Renesme, though?
Suzy-Chapstick chapter 1 . 11/10/2018
Kageyjay chapter 1 . 3/20/2018
So Jasper is able to hold Bella now. I like how you gave him understanding about how deeply Edward loved Bella. That he switched to drawing them was a nice touch.
ak chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
Wow, what a kind and well-imagined story. Thank you for writing!
Debbie Hicks chapter 1 . 1/10/2018
Cchapter 2. attac ked as all theen b itten Claire young frozen here as a c hild forever then Volturi found m e sick with venom then Drainedof blood the dam ages was global galactic anemis then scream ing broke treaty the law then Bled to death died her lost heartbeat with a second bite with them you there who turned her with them then Assaulted the seer found me dying of blood loss CARLISLE Help it's spreading too far in then with them surrendering then sceamin g Fled from here the sickness was venom then skins were too hardest what she don e froze a child you Cullens b roke law of a Immortal child dren with her must die Screams rIPPED From here then Blazing with them with others heads were off tell them they b een destroyed bound in this home blown bring them but too late punished m e with them were unable to seed with help blown destroyed Smashed with donated kid's bodies now unable the special rings glowing then shattered then were un able return were shattered b rought them here then suddenly too late were n ot there brought the bodies the im print grew as a teenager with kids four with imprints blew up but suddenly were more were cursed then too late were undead then the head her salilva is Venomous but tran sform ed as all of people teenagers you are what then SMASHED freely were as all of them brought here horrifying news she exists is not mortal cursed but with them are Kindred are the embraced are Slayers and Hunters done destruction under the guidance of Bellon a warlady of Forks, Washington is dead with them rose from both nuked bring them as all of them as all of them thennews of as all of the very more with them blacked outside shattered nDestroyed with us/as all of them brought here then too late killed by the Volturi themselves us/them were with powers did hunt as a more monstrous as all of animals had manners then Pierced frely crun ched freely as all of them escaped faster thannormal was from her then used my treacking you are guilty aBlew apart Brought with all but no longer freely then popped freely bring them then had as all of killed now families noticed how cold we were then decree us a n ewest species evolved from here then too late then lost as all of them then b ut families joined us/them then sm ashed freely things books and all clothes fused withing bodysuits shattered then crunched freely then lost the ablity to mate shattered freely Smashed now too late aboard then were as all with as all of them but the bodies of as all of deceaed beings and animals then lost them to Vampire burnt as all of then then forbid us/all merged then All of them then EXPLODING As all of them but destroying itself as all of it then with more then lost bodies as all of them witnessed as all of them remodeled as all of them now blasting as a starship exiled from Earth now stranded on Vulcan then 2918-2381 to beyond exploded freely then too late lost as all of four as all of bodies then now destroyed as all of them from the ground as all of the very all joined us/as all of them the kids were freed from here then reported to them they are dead all of them but they been extin ct here good they are split then now lost the need then were cut from here.
GUEST chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
When she has a fever, any of the Cullen family could help her/
annaharding chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
Sweet story! Thanx for sharing.
Crimson Rhage chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
I have to admit, the ending is not at all what I thought it would be when I started reading, but it was perfect. This was a great one-shot, though as with many I wish it was longer. I love reading from Jasper's POV and your story didn't disappoint. Thanks for sharing!
Shadowhunterlover 00 chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
InternetUnicorn chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
twilightromance4ever chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
so cute!
dashundra89 chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Loved it.
PinkRibbons19 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
I love this so much think its my fourth time reading this lol
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