Reviews for My Brother and His Girlfriend
sapphire0427 chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I love the idea of Jasper drawing. It seems like a natural way for him to deal with all the emotions that surround him.

Lovely story.
Sarabiiiiiiii chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
I like your story, I've added it to my C2 if thats okay :)
Ana Behibak chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Aw. Its so cute. We need more Jasper stories.
kafairybliss chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Nice story. Kinda makes me want to read more about Jasper. (sorry Edward, you're still my favorite)
Almostafreebird chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Ahh! That is so sad! But I loved it!
xFinnickthePervx chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
tee hee hee! Loved it!

Keep writing!
carsonists chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
This is so realistic and awesome. You did Jasper perfectly!
edwardmasenlover chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
such a cute one shot. Well done.
jol27 chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
very sweet . soft gentle and emotional very Jasper x
the-glory-days chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
This was beautiful! Heart wrenching, really!
Linstock chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
This was great. I like that you showed Jasper in a positive caring light. I also like how you showed the Edward’s love and Bella’s fear of loosing him with such a light hand. Not overdone or cloying, but gentle and sweet. Well done.
TheTimeLady125 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
OH!upDATE!
Kiba Wolf chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Really well written, really beautiful, good job )
Viper003 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Really good!

I'm glad you captured that side of Jasper, usually all we see is him suffering by his thirst or all uptight.

Great job!
Mimi-Love-4ever chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Aw, I loved this. It was so. . .aw. I know really eloquent, huh? lol. And you're right, there aren't many Jasper stories out there, so keep 'em coming. :) I love Jasper. :D

~*~Mimi-Love-4Ever
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