Reviews for My Brother and His Girlfriend
greenleaves12 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I really liked being in Jasper's head since he's so quiet, usually.
azyungalah chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
nyaaaaaaaaaaaah, this is so adorable! I love reading from Jasper's POV because it's either funny or all sensitive and stuff like this was.
kagome0561 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
This is so sweet. I love it! :)
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
That was nice.

you wrote it well.
MomoMouat97 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
:D
euphoricxdreamer chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Tooo sweet! I loved it!
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Very cute~! XD
Cuteness chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
This was adorable, and I think you should ignore what SPYforYOU stated. It is definitely possible to weight 94 pounds when you're 17 and not be anorexic, it's based on your stature. Im 16 (in a few months 17) and I can't seem to get above 92 no matter what. Anyway, the comment irked me a little...why would you act so sure of yourself when you're wrong? blahh..w.e.;; good job on this, it was really sweet.
Daintress chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
This is very sweetly written. :)
Kylee-Cat chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
This was very good. I like Jasper. :)
CassandraLowery chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Really sweet story...loved it! :)
laura lou who chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
This is so beautiful. I wanted it to keep going. Too short!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
awwwww
fayray chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Please sequel this story i have a book of oneshots this one is good and would love to see more Like the story Stitches in Time

would love to see it sequeled but they probably wont Good Luck in

the future your AWESOME AUTHORS !
wobblewiggle chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Wow! That was just lovely! I really enjoyed this although I'm a little surprised Alice wasn't hovering a little more. Jasper's thoughts about Bella, her weight, her appearance and then on Bella's and Edward's relationship (specifically Edward's care of and for her) were very insightful. I especially loved how you finished it with Jasper using them as his models for the love and care picture.

Great story! Thank you for all your work.
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