Reviews for My Brother and His Girlfriend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked being in Jasper's head since he's so quiet, usually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nyaaaaaaaaaaaah, this is so adorable! I love reading from Jasper's POV because it's either funny or all sensitive and stuff like this was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so sweet. I love it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was nice. you wrote it well. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Tooo sweet! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute~! XD |
![]() ![]() This was adorable, and I think you should ignore what SPYforYOU stated. It is definitely possible to weight 94 pounds when you're 17 and not be anorexic, it's based on your stature. Im 16 (in a few months 17) and I can't seem to get above 92 no matter what. Anyway, the comment irked me a little...why would you act so sure of yourself when you're wrong? blahh..w.e.;; good job on this, it was really sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very sweetly written. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very good. I like Jasper. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really sweet story...loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so beautiful. I wanted it to keep going. Too short! |
![]() ![]() awwwww |
![]() ![]() Please sequel this story i have a book of oneshots this one is good and would love to see more Like the story Stitches in Time would love to see it sequeled but they probably wont Good Luck in the future your AWESOME AUTHORS ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That was just lovely! I really enjoyed this although I'm a little surprised Alice wasn't hovering a little more. Jasper's thoughts about Bella, her weight, her appearance and then on Bella's and Edward's relationship (specifically Edward's care of and for her) were very insightful. I especially loved how you finished it with Jasper using them as his models for the love and care picture. Great story! Thank you for all your work. |