Reviews for My Brother and His Girlfriend
ArchangelicSlayer chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
That was gorgeous! It was a beautiful, soft,flowing, excellent set of magic written down on a piece of paper. You deserve to collect a prize or something : )
redflashlight chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
thank you for making this! I loved the story. Awesome!
MajoringinFandoms chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Jasper being affectionate with Bella... we never did see enough of them as brother and sister. ;D He'd make an awesome older brother. Fabulous one-shot, I really enjoyed it!
SPYforYOU chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
The part where Bella only weights 94 pounds now... that is impossible unless she is anorexic. She's 17! I'm 14 and I weigh 94 pounds.

The fic was okay. A little OOC, but nice.
quoideneufj chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
And, this I'm sure, is how many a Jasper x Bella story started. lol.
potteward chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
aweeee such a sewwt story i really liked it
Zesty T chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
This was very cute and touching. Also very refreshing to have an POV that's not Edward or Bella.
cecilia4059 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I'm touched. Can't get enough of Edward/Bella love story.
Sarah chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Awww, that's a nice story.
Twiggalina chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
What a great Oneshot!
000h chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
You should carry this on, It was brilliant! :)
LeeseeQ chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
This is my favorite kind of fic! I loved it. Don't you just love how Edward takes care of things- including Bella. Delicious.
Zhee chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Truly nice!
lovelybluesky chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
So sweet I loved it!
nomore.fake chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
aww, that was sooo sweet :) love Jasper :)
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