Reviews for My Brother and His Girlfriend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was gorgeous! It was a beautiful, soft,flowing, excellent set of magic written down on a piece of paper. You deserve to collect a prize or something : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for making this! I loved the story. Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jasper being affectionate with Bella... we never did see enough of them as brother and sister. ;D He'd make an awesome older brother. Fabulous one-shot, I really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The part where Bella only weights 94 pounds now... that is impossible unless she is anorexic. She's 17! I'm 14 and I weigh 94 pounds. The fic was okay. A little OOC, but nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And, this I'm sure, is how many a Jasper x Bella story started. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aweeee such a sewwt story i really liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very cute and touching. Also very refreshing to have an POV that's not Edward or Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm touched. Can't get enough of Edward/Bella love story. |
![]() ![]() Awww, that's a nice story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great Oneshot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should carry this on, It was brilliant! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my favorite kind of fic! I loved it. Don't you just love how Edward takes care of things- including Bella. Delicious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, that was sooo sweet :) love Jasper :) |